a sentence starter that tells the reader when something happens

Writing the build-up of ‘Lucky Dip'

English

In this unit, pupils have learned how to use an apostrophe for contraction when writing sentences as part of a narrative. In 'Florence Nightingale and Mary Seacole: Non-Chronological Report', pupils will build on this by using this skill in sentences written within a different text type. 

In 'Otherwise: Narrative Writing', pupils learned how write compound sentences using co-ordinating conjunctions. In this unit, pupils will build on this knowledge by writing complex sentences using a range of jining conjunctions.

'Lucky Dip': narrative writing

Which part of a story is where the writer might introduce a problem?

Which part of a story is where the writer might build up tension and excitement?

What is the problem Emily has in the build-up of 'Lucky Dip'?

True or false? Fronted adverbials of time start sentences.

What piece of punctuation comes after a fronted adverbial of time?

Which of these fronted adverbials of time would tell the reader that the action was happening very quickly?

Which is the first part of a story staircase?

Which part of the story staircase comes after the opening?

The build-up is the part of the story where the writer will introduce ...

What is the problem Emily faces in the build-up of 'Lucky Dip'?

What is the name of the machine that the magical bunny is inside?

Who pulled Emily out of the arcade at the end of the build-up?

This lesson will be removed by end of Summer Term 2025.

Writing the build-up of ‘Lucky Dip'

Lesson outcome

This lesson will be removed by end of Summer Term 2025.