the process of improving writing to improve text flow and overall quality

a set of standardised symbols and marks used in written language to structure sentences

the way that words are arranged within sentences to convey meaning

Editing the main body of a diary entry

English

In this unit, pupils embed narrative skills including show-not-tell and dialogue to convey character and a were introduced to a range of cohesive devices. In 'The Viewer', pupils will further develop their use of cohesive devices and develop strategies to build suspense when describing a setting.

In 'Whale Rider', pupils developed their narrative writing skills by using show-not-tell and dialogue to convey character. In this unit, pupils will further embed these skills and use a range of devices to build cohesion. 

'How to Train Your Dragon': diary and narrative writing

the process of improving writing to improve text flow

standardised symbols and marks used in written language

how words are arranged and organised to convey meaning

to separate adjectives in an expanded noun phrase

to separate a non-finite subordinate clause from a main clause

Which of these are types of language choice that you would use in a diary entry?

selecting which parts of the writing to improve

making edits to punctuation, grammar and sentence structure

Which of these are part of the editing process?

Select the correct spelling of one of the dragon types faced in the arena in the story.

Which punctuation mark is used to separate main and subordinate clauses?

it explains when, where or how something happened

a sentence formed of a main clause and a subordinate clause

'Text cohesion' refers to which of the following?

a set of standardised symbols and marks to structure sentences

how words are arranged within sentences to convey meaning

Select the sentence that uses an apostrophe for contraction correctly.

Match these contracted words to their non-contracted versions.

Match the subordinate clauses to their examples.

This lesson will be removed by end of Summer Term 2025.

Editing the main body of a diary entry

Lesson outcome

This lesson will be removed by end of Summer Term 2025.