the process of improving writing to improve text flow and overall quality

a set of standardised symbols and marks used in written language to structure sentences

the way words are arranged and organised within sentences to convey meaning

the use of specific words and phrases to convey a meaning

Peer editing a soliloquy based on 'Macbeth'

English

In 'Macbeth', pupils learn about character, plot and theme in a Shakespearean play for the first time. In 'Shakespeare's ’Romeo and Juliet’: Diary and Narrative Writing', pupils will learn how Shakespeare explores multiple key themes throughout a single play.’

In 'The Highwayman: Narrative Writing', pupils developed their understanding of how to create atmosphere and engage the reader using figurative language. In 'Shakespeare's ’Macbeth’: Narrative and Soliloquy Writing', pupils will use figurative language to write a narrative based on Shakespearean tragedy and convey characters' thoughts and feelings through soliloquy writing.

Shakespeare's 'Macbeth': narrative and soliloquy writing

In what order have we peer edited our work?

it means two of you can spot mistakes or think of ways to improve your work

Why is it useful to edit your work with a peer?

When editing punctuation, what kind of mistakes are we looking for?

there is no capital letter to start the sentence

there is a missing question mark at the end of the sentence

there is a missing exclamation mark at the end of the sentence

there is a missing full stop at the end of the sentence

What needs to be edited in the following sentence?
'What would become of me if I was caught.'

check that the vocabulary we use is appropriate for the style of writing.

check that the vocabulary we use is ambitious.

check that the writing looks really neat.

Lady Macbeth stops Macbeth from killing Duncan. 

Macbeth sees a dagger and decides to kill Duncan.

What word is the missing word in this quote? "I go, and it is done: the {{}} invites me. Hear it not, Duncan, for it is a knell that summons thee to Heaven, or to Hell."

gives human characteristics to non-human things

compares two things using the words 'like' or 'as'

compares two things by saying that one thing is another

a type of subordinate clause that starts with a subordinating conjunction 

a group of words that contains a verb and make complete sense 

a type of subordinate clause that can start with a progressive tense (-ing) verb

Which of the following are examples of non-finite clauses?

This lesson will be removed by end of Summer Term 2025.

Peer editing a soliloquy based on 'Macbeth'

Lesson outcome

This lesson will be removed by end of Summer Term 2025.