the process of improving writing to improve text flow and overall quality

a set of standardised symbols and marks used in written language to structure sentences

the way words are arranged and organised within sentences to convey meaning

Editing the diet section of a non-chronological report about tigers

English

Identifying the features of a non-chronological report in preparation for writing about tigers

Researching tigers for a non-chronological report

Planning the introduction of a non-chronological report about tigers

Writing the introduction of a non-chronological report about tigers

Planning the diet section of a non-chronological report about tigers

Writing the diet section of a non-chronological report about tigers

Planning the adaptations section of a non-chronological report about tigers

Writing the adaptations section of a non-chronological report about tigers

Planning the conclusion of a non-chronological report about tigers

Writing the conclusion of a non-chronological report about tigers

Presenting a non-chronological report about tigers

In 'The Titanic: Journalistic Report Writing', pupils will develop their understanding of writing to inform their reader and apply this in the context of a journalistic report..

In ‘The Angler Fish: Non-Chronological Report’, pupils wrote solely using the active voice. In this unit, pupils will be introduced to using passive voice within a non-chronological report.

In this unit, pupils research tigers' diets and adaptations to write an informative non-chronological report about them. They spend a whole lesson editing their writing, focusing on key Year 5 punctuation, sentence structures and vocabulary choices. Finally, pupils present their reports.

The aye-aye or wild cats: non-chronological report

is selective about which language, punctuation, spelling and grammar to improve

Which of these does high quality editing do?

improving writing to improve text flow and quality

symbols used in written language to structure sentences

how words are organised in a sentence to convey meaning

When editing **punctuation**, which of these do we check?

how the writing flows when we read it back

When editing sentence structure, which of these do we check for?

When editing vocabulary and spelling, which of these do we check for?

special features an animal has to help it survive

how the writing flows, meets its purpose and keeps the reader engaged

'Text cohesion' refers to which one of these?

They can separate a main clause from a subordinate clause.

Fascinatingly, tigers which are carnivores eat deer, birds, fish and boar.

Fascinatingly, tigers, which are carnivores, eat deer, birds, fish and boar.

Fascinatingly, tigers which are carnivores, eat deer birds fish and boar.

Fascinatingly tigers, which are carnivores, eat deer birds fish and boar.

Select the sentence that uses commas correctly.

This lesson was made for home learning during the pandemic.

Editing the diet section of a non-chronological report about tigers

Lesson outcome

This lesson was made for home learning during the pandemic.