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Lesson 20 of 20
  • Year 11
  • Edexcel

Reviewing a comparative response to ideas of transience in unseen poetry

I can reflect on and rewrite an extended comparative response on ideas of transience in unseen poetry.

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Lesson 20 of 20
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  • Year 11
  • Edexcel

Reviewing a comparative response to ideas of transience in unseen poetry

I can reflect on and rewrite an extended comparative response on ideas of transience in unseen poetry.

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Lesson details

Key learning points

  1. Reflecting on your work is an important part of understanding what went well and what you could improve on.
  2. Rewriting your work is a chance to improve it based on your reflections.
  3. When writing comparatively, you want to explore the similarities and differences in how the poets create meaning.
  4. When considering a personal response, you may ask yourself what questions the poems cause you to ask.

Keywords

  • Transience - the state or fact of lasting only for a short time

  • Reflecting - thinking deeply or carefully about

  • Clarity - the quality of being clear and easy to understand

  • Rewriting - the act of writing a text again, in order to improve it or change it

  • Effective - successful in producing a desired or intended result

Common misconception

That you can only analyse what techniques a poet chooses to use.

Sometimes it's very powerful to analyse why a poet may have chosen not to use a technique in contrast to one who did choose to use it.


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It would be helpful for the students to share their responses to Task A to help them understand what makes an effective comparative response.
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Equipment

You will need a copy of Michael Laskey’s ‘Nobody’ and Robin Robertson’s ‘Donegal’ which are available in the additional materials.

Content guidance

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Supervision

Adult supervision recommended

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