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      Crafting an engaging narrative

      Lesson details

      Learning outcome

      I can plan, write and proofread a complete narrative piece of writing.

      Key learning points

      1. We need to plan our creative writing to ensure it is clear, cohesive and engaging.
      2. We can use a range of language and structural techniques to craft our writing.
      3. Single paragraph outlines can be used to plan your ideas before you begin writing.
      4. Proofreading is an active process that enables us to spot and correct errors in written work.

      Keywords

      • Charred - burned and blackened by fire

      • Remnants - a small piece of something left from a larger original amount

      • Proofread - carefully check for errors in a text before it is published or finished

      Common misconception

      Proofreading your work is not important if you plan it.

      Proofreading is equally important as planning. In pressured writing environments, we can easily make mistakes that we are not aware of.

      Teacher tip

      You can practice writing whilst your students write to build a sense of trust and shared understanding of the difficulties involved in the writing process.

      Content guidance

      Depiction or discussion of violence or suffering

      Depiction or discussion of violence or suffering

      Supervision

      Adult supervision required

      Licence

      This content is © Oak National Academy Limited (2026), licensed on Open Government Licence version 3.0
      except where otherwise stated. See Oak's terms & conditions
      (Collection 2).

      Lesson video

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      Prior knowledge starter quiz

      6 Questions

      Q1.
      What does proofreading mean?

      to rewrite an entire piece of work
      Correct answer: to read through work and look for any errors
      to write down all the spellings for words before you write something

      Q2.
      Which of these includes an inverted sentence structure?

      Correct answer: Tall and proud stood the oak tree.
      The oak tree stood tall and proud.
      The oak tree was tall, proud and anicent.

      Q3.
      Which of these uses asyndeton and a climactic sentence structure?

      It was humid, suffocating and warm.
      It was warm, suffocating, humid.
      Correct answer: It was warm, humid, suffocating.

      Q4.
      Match the time technique to its definition.

      Correct Answer:flashback,referring to a past moment in a narrative

      referring to a past moment in a narrative

      Correct Answer:non-linear narrative,describing events in a different period to that which they occur

      describing events in a different period to that which they occur

      Correct Answer:time jumps,skipping periods of time in a narrative

      skipping periods of time in a narrative

      Correct Answer:flashforward,referring to a future moment in a narrative

      referring to a future moment in a narrative

      Q5.
      How can we craft a powerful flashback?

      make the flashback similar to the present moment
      Correct answer: make the flashback contrast with the present moment
      make the flashback occur at least 50 years before the present moment

      Q6.
      Which of these tangible objects best symbolises hope?

      an umbrella
      a televison
      Correct answer: a lamp

      6 Questions

      Q1.
      Which of these would not be involved in proofreading?

      checking your use of punctuation
      checking your spellings
      Correct answer: rewriting your opening paragraph

      Q2.
      Which of these would ensure we have planned a piece of work thoroughly?

      Correct answer: plan the details of each paragraph
      write down all the techniques you will use
      plan all the ambitious vocabulary you will use

      Q3.
      Why is it important to proofread a piece of work?

      to make our writing longer
      Correct answer: to ensure we correct punctuation, spelling and grammar errors
      to add more complex vocabulary, making it harder to understand

      Q4.
      Starting with the first, put the elements of a single paragraph outline in chronological order.

      1 - topic sentence
      2 - supporting detail
      3 - concluding sentence

      Q5.
      How can we use paragraphs in an engaging way?

      plan each paragraph to describe a random element of a scene
      Correct answer: build tension as the paragraphs develop
      make sure each paragraph includes five sentences

      Q6.
      Which sentence uses the word 'remnants' accurately?

      'The remnants of the project are due tomorrow.'
      Correct answer: 'After the fire, only remnants of the building remained.'
      'She prepared the remnants for dinner.'

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