Improving and rewriting analytical responses on poetry
Lesson details
Learning outcome
I can rewrite an extended response, using suggested improvements.
Key learning points
- An excellent analytical response is clear, nuanced and concise.
- A nuanced response acknowledges and explores the shades of meaning within the text.
- Comparative connectives can be used to link ideas together and explore connections between poems.
- Asking yourself 'why' can be a useful exercise when writing an analytical response.
- You can use context to inform your comparison of the poets' perspectives.
Keywords
Nuanced - acknowledging the subtle shades of meaning within something
To reflect - thinking deeply or carefully
Clarity - the quality of being clear and easy to understand
Concise - using as few words as possible to express as much meaning as possible
Common misconception
Students often think that once they have written a response, it is the finished product.
The first draft is simply a first attempt - improvements can always be made and the second draft is always stronger.
Teacher tip
You could model the annotation of the Oak pupil response in Learning Cycle 1 under a visualiser, simply using the resources as a prompt for discussion.
Equipment
You will need access to a copy of the Eduqas poetry anthology for this lesson.
Content guidance
Depiction or discussion of sensitive content
Depiction or discussion of violence or suffering
Supervision
Adult supervision recommended
Licence
Lesson video
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Prior knowledge starter quiz
6 Questions
Q1.Which poem in the Eduqas anthology was written by Ted Hughes?
Q2.Which poem in the Eduqas anthology explores the mundanity in romantic relationships?
Q3.Which of the following poems in the Eduqas poetry anthology presents a romanticised portrayal of war?
Q4.What is enjambment?
Q5.Which of the following poems were written about World War I?
Q6.Here is some context about one of the poets on the anthology. Which poet is it about? 'This poet served in World War I. He was sent home with shell-shock in 1917. He died 7 days before WWI ended.'
Assessment exit quiz
6 Questions
Q1.Who wrote 'Ozymandias'?
Q2. is the quality of being clear and easy to understand.
Q3.What should a good thesis statement do?
Q4.What does nuanced mean?
Q5.How can you ensure you write a nuanced but concise response in a literature essay?
Q6.Match the quotation up to the kind of power that is being explored in this moment of 'Ozymandias'.
"The hand that mocked them"
"I met a traveller from an antique land"
"Round the decay/ Of that colossal wreck"
"Half-sunk, a shattered visage lies"
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