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      Planning to write the opening of the animated story 'Otherwise'

      Lesson details

      Learning outcome

      I can plan the opening of ‘Otherwise’.

      Key learning points

      1. The purpose of the opening is to introduce the main characters and the setting.
      2. Planning is an important part of preparing to write.
      3. Our plan will contain ambitious vocabulary.
      4. Our plan will contain nouns, adjectives, verbs and adverbs.

      Keywords

      • Ambitious vocabulary - the use of precise and descriptive words in writing

      • Plan - a framework that writers create before they write

      Common misconception

      Pupils may write in full sentences in their plan.

      Highlight that a plan is written in note form and model this explicitly to the children. Explain that you will turn your plan into full sentences when you write.

      Teacher tip

      Encourage pupils to use the vocabulary generated in the previous lesson in their plan.

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      Lesson video

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      Prior knowledge starter quiz

      6 Questions

      Q1.
      Fill in the blank: An expanded noun phrase may contain two adjectives and a ...

      verb.
      Correct answer: noun.
      adverb.

      Q2.
      In an expanded noun phrase, you need to include a full stop between the adjectives.

      True
      Correct answer: False

      Q3.
      A character is a person or animal in a story.

      Correct answer: True
      False

      Q4.
      What colour is Anders?

      green
      Correct answer: red
      grey

      Q5.
      Which two adjectives could be used to describe the skin of a chameleon?

      fluffy
      Correct answer: rough
      Correct answer: scaly
      furry

      Q6.
      Which two adjectives could be used to describe Anders' personality?

      Correct answer: friendly
      mean
      lazy
      Correct answer: curious

      6 Questions

      Q1.
      Order these parts of a story staircase.

      1 - opening
      2 - build up
      3 - climax
      4 - resolution

      Q2.
      Which two of these does the opening introduce to the reader?

      the problem in the story
      Correct answer: the characters
      Correct answer: the setting

      Q3.
      What is the setting of the animation 'Otherwise'?

      a city
      Correct answer: a jungle
      a beach

      Q4.
      Using ambitious vocabulary means using words that are precise and descriptive.

      Correct answer: True
      False

      Q5.
      Order these parts of the opening of 'Otherwise'.

      1 - Anders cracks out of his egg.
      2 - Anders tries to shake hands with the green chameleons.
      3 - The green chameleons ignore him and walk away.

      Q6.
      Nouns are doing or being words.

      True
      Correct answer: False

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