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      Writing descriptive sentences about a special item based on ‘The Proudest Blue’

      Lesson details

      Learning outcome

      I can write descriptive sentences about a special item.

      Key learning points

      1. The colour blue is referred to repeatedly throughout the story and is part of what makes Asiya's hijab special to her.
      2. The author states what the hijab isn't as a way of communicating its special nature.
      3. Colours can be used to represent ideas, objects and feelings.
      4. Precise adjectives can enhance the description of colours and nouns.
      5. Similes can be used to compare two things using 'like' or 'as'.

      Keywords

      • Colour - a visual perception related to an object's light absorption

      • Simile - a linguistic device that compares two things using 'like' or 'as', highlighting similarities and creating vivid imagery

      • Compare - to note what is the same and what is different

      • Adjective - a word that describes a noun

      Common misconception

      Children may find it difficult to develop appropriate similes for their special item.

      Model examples for a range of colours and powerful nouns they could be compared to. E.g. Green items could be compared to elements of a meadow or a tree.

      Teacher tip

      Explore different examples of similes and consider the meaning and importance of the comparison. E.g. 'As green as a pea'. Ask the children to consider whether comparing their item to a pea would communicate its true special nature.

      Equipment

      You will need a copy of the 2020 Andersen Press edition of ‘The Proudest Blue’ by Ibtihaj Muhammad for this lesson.

      Licence

      This content is © Oak National Academy Limited (2025), licensed on Open Government Licence version 3.0
      except where otherwise stated. See Oak's terms & conditions
      (Collection 2).

      Lesson video

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      Prior knowledge starter quiz

      6 Questions

      Q1.
      The 'hijab' is a special item in 'The Proudest Blue'. What type of word is 'hijab'?

      an adjective
      a verb
      Correct answer: a noun

      Q2.
      What type of words do you use to describe nouns?

      adverbs
      verbs
      Correct answer: adjectives

      Q3.
      If you use more than one adjective to describe a noun, which piece of punctuation do you use to separate them?

      question mark
      Correct answer: comma
      full stop

      Q4.
      Which conjunction do you use to give a reason?

      Correct answer: because
      and
      so

      Q5.
      What does 'descriptive' refer to in writing?

      Correct answer: use of language which creates a vivid image for the reader
      simple and factual language to teach the reader
      questions to ask the reader

      Q6.
      Which of the following phrases would be considered most descriptive?

      blue hijab
      sea blue, silk hijab
      Correct answer: sea blue, silk hijab flowing with pride

      6 Questions

      Q1.
      Which of the following adjectives would communicate the special nature of an item?

      Correct answer: rare
      nice
      Correct answer: precious
      Correct answer: cherished
      simple

      Q2.
      Which of the following adjectives would appropriately describe the colour green?

      Correct answer: leafy
      Correct answer: olive
      kind
      rose

      Q3.
      Match the colours to the appropriate adjectives to describe them.

      Correct Answer:red,burning, fiery, scarlet, crimson, rose, flaming, hot

      burning, fiery, scarlet, crimson, rose, flaming, hot

      Correct Answer:white,snow, pearl, chalky, frosted, pale, cream, milk

      snow, pearl, chalky, frosted, pale, cream, milk

      Correct Answer:brown,chocolate, tanned, dusky, coffee, toasted, chestnut

      chocolate, tanned, dusky, coffee, toasted, chestnut

      Q4.
      What is a simile?

      Correct answer: a linguistic device that compares two things, highlighting similarities
      a linguistic device that compares two things, highlighting differences
      a linguistic device that pairs two things which rhyme

      Q5.
      Match the simile to the sense it evokes for the reader.

      Correct Answer:a faded shade of orange like the sunset,sight

      sight

      Correct Answer:jangles like chimes in the wind,sound

      sound

      Correct Answer:blanket as soft as a feather,touch

      touch

      Q6.
      Complete the following simile appropriately: Her colourful scarf...

      Correct answer: is like a rainbow.
      Correct answer: is as fluffy as sheep's fur.
      is fluffy and warm.
      is long and tassly

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