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      Writing sentences about a special item based on 'The Proudest Blue'

      Lesson details

      Learning outcome

      I can write a sequence of sentences about a special item.

      Key learning points

      1. Notes from a written plan support in writing a sequence of senences.
      2. Co-ordination can be used to join two simple sentences that carry equal importance.
      3. Subordination can be used to stretch a main clause and explain ideas to the reader.
      4. Fronted adverbials followed by a comma can be used to sequence sentences and add detail to the main clause.

      Keywords

      • Co-ordination - joining two simple sentences with 'and', 'but' or 'or'

      • Subordination - joining a simple sentence with a second idea of lower importance

      • Fronted adverbial - a sentence starter followed by a comma

      • Sequence - a particular order in which things follow each other

      Common misconception

      Students commonly forget the comma after fronted adverbials.

      Model sentences including fronted adverbials missing the comma and ask students to spot the punctuation error.

      Teacher tip

      Focus more heavily on co-ordination and subordination for the first writing task and the use of fronted adverbials for the second writing task. This will ease cognitive load for students and support them in meeting the full success criteria.

      Equipment

      You will need a copy of the 2020 Andersen Press edition of ‘The Proudest Blue’ by Ibtihaj Muhammad for this lesson.

      Licence

      This content is © Oak National Academy Limited (2025), licensed on Open Government Licence version 3.0
      except where otherwise stated. See Oak's terms & conditions
      (Collection 2).

      Lesson video

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      Prior knowledge starter quiz

      6 Questions

      Q1.
      What is a simple sentence?

      Correct answer: a sentence about one idea that makes complete sense
      a phrase about one idea
      a sentence formed of two simple sentences and a joining word

      Q2.
      How does a sentence always begin?

      with a full stop
      Correct answer: with a capital letter
      with a noun

      Q3.
      Which pieces of punctuation can you end a sentence with?

      a comma
      Correct answer: a full stop
      Correct answer: an exclamation mark
      Correct answer: a question mark

      Q4.
      What is a compound sentence?

      a sentence about one idea that makes complete sense
      Correct answer: a sentence formed of two simple sentences and a joining word
      a question

      Q5.
      What is the name for the written framework that you create before writing?

      Correct answer: a plan
      an idea
      a draft

      Q6.
      Which of the following are the three co-ordinating conjunctions used in compound sentences?

      Correct answer: and
      Correct answer: or
      Correct answer: but
      when
      why

      6 Questions

      Q1.
      When do you use the co-ordinating conjunction 'and'?

      Correct answer: for building on the preceding main clause
      for contrasting the preceding main clause
      for another option from the preceding main clause

      Q2.
      When do you use the co-ordinating conjunction 'but'?

      for another option from the preceding main clause
      for building on the preceding main clause
      Correct answer: for contrasting the preceding main clause

      Q3.
      When do you use the co-ordinating conjunction 'or'?

      for contrasting the preceding main clause
      Correct answer: for another option from the preceding main clause
      for building on the preceding main clause

      Q4.
      Which of the following subordinating conjunctions is used to give a reason for the main clause?

      Correct answer: because
      so
      that

      Q5.
      Which of the following subordinating conjunctions is used to show an effect of the main clause?

      Correct answer: so
      because
      that

      Q6.
      Which of the following subordinating conjunctions is used to add detail to the main clause?

      Correct answer: that
      because
      so

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