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      Planning the build-up of a narrative based on 'Jabberwocky'

      Lesson details

      Learning outcome

      I can plan the build-up of a narrative based on ‘Jabberwocky’.

      Key learning points

      1. The purpose of the build-up is to develop the characters and build up the excitement.
      2. When we plan, we log precise and ambitious vocabulary to help paint vivid pictures for our reader.
      3. Fronted adverbials of time, place and manner are included in a plan to add extra detail about the action.
      4. A plan is most often written in note-form, out of full sentences.

      Keywords

      • Plan - a framework that writers create before they write a section or whole text

      • Notes - written out of full sentences

      • Ambitious vocabulary - high-level language in writing that meets the text purpose

      • Fronted adverbial - sentence starter followed by a comma

      Common misconception

      Planning needs to be detailed and include full sentences.

      Planning should only log key vocabulary and it should be written in note-form using bullet points.

      Teacher tip

      Re-read the build-up several times so that pupils are clear about which moments of 'Jabberwocky' are in the build-up.

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      Prior knowledge starter quiz

      6 Questions

      Q1.
      Choose the most precise adverb to complete the following sentence: '__________, the young boy crept through the forest.'

      Excitedly,
      Correct answer: Bravely,
      Happily,
      Angrily,

      Q2.
      What is a plan?

      a final piece of written work
      Correct answer: a framework that writers create before they write
      a writer's first ideas said aloud about their writing

      Q3.
      Where does the young boy rest when he becomes tired looking for the Jabberwock?

      under a bush
      on a pile of leaves
      Correct answer: on a tree
      outside the forest

      Q4.
      Which of these is a fronted adverbial followed by?

      exclamation mark
      full stop
      Correct answer: comma
      inverted commas
      question mark

      Q5.
      Which of these is a full sentence?

      The dark, forbidden forest.
      Correct answer: Darkness enveloped the forbidden forest.
      In the forbidden forest.
      Deep in the heart of the forbidden forest.

      Q6.
      Match the word class to its example.

      Correct Answer:adjective,vicious

      vicious

      Correct Answer:noun,jaws

      jaws

      Correct Answer:verb,lurked

      lurked

      Correct Answer:adverb,nervously

      nervously

      6 Questions

      Q1.
      True or false? A plan should be written in full sentences.

      Correct Answer: false, False

      Q2.
      What are the purposes of the build-up of a narrative?

      to introduce the characters and setting
      Correct answer: to build up the excitement
      to ask the reader direct questions so that they carry on reading
      Correct answer: to develop the characters

      Q3.
      A fronted adverbial of __________ tells the reader how the action in the main idea takes place.

      time
      place
      Correct answer: manner
      cause

      Q4.
      Put the four key moments of the build-up in chronological order.

      1 - The young man bravely walked through the dark forest looking for the Jabberwock.
      2 - He rested on a tree when he heard a strange, ominous noise.
      3 - The Jabberwock appeared from the shadows and slowly approached him.
      4 - The Jabberwock’s eyes were burning-red and it had fierce teeth and lethal claws.

      Q5.
      Match each word class to its example.

      Correct Answer:noun,tree

      tree

      Correct Answer:adjective,razor-sharp

      razor-sharp

      Correct Answer:adverb,slowly

      slowly

      Correct Answer:verb,crept

      crept

      Q6.
      True or false? This is a complete sentence: 'A pair of huge jaws and a long, writhing tongue.'

      Correct Answer: false, False

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