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Writing the climax of a narrative based on 'Jabberwocky'

I can write the climax of a narrative based on ‘Jabberwocky’.

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Writing the climax of a narrative based on 'Jabberwocky'

I can write the climax of a narrative based on ‘Jabberwocky’.

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Key learning points

  1. The purpose of the climax is to describe the main action and take the suspense and excitement to its highest point.
  2. Direct speech is punctuated using inverted commas. Dialogue moves the action forward.
  3. Notes from a plan are used to form full sentences.
  4. A range of sentence types (simple, compound and complex) improves text flow for the reader.
  5. A range of fronted adverbials is used to improve text flow.

Keywords

  • Text flow - how a text is written to keep the reader engaged

  • Fronted adverbial - a sentence starter followed by a comma

  • Direct speech - shows that a character is speaking out loud in a text

Common misconception

Pupils may struggle with remembering the punctuation rules in speech second sentences.

Provide a visual scaffold of the speech second punctuation rules. Encourage pupils to use this when writing direct speech.


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