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      Planning the first recount paragraph of a journalistic report about the Titanic

      Lesson details

      Learning outcome

      I can use research to plan the recount paragraph, focusing on the Titanic's design and construction.

      Key learning points

      1. The purpose of the recount section is to engage the reader and give them specific information about what happened.
      2. An introductory sentence explains what the paragraph is about.
      3. Relative complex sentences and passive voice enable the writer to convey information in varied ways.
      4. Relative clauses begin with the relative pronouns ‘who’ or ‘which’.
      5. Plans should include clear, concise notes.

      Keywords

      • Specific information - clear, exact and particular information

      • Active voice - a spoken or written voice in which the subject does the verb in a sentence

      • Passive voice - a spoken or written voice in which the subject is acted upon by the verb

      • Relative complex sentence - a sentence formed of a main clause and a relative subordinate clause

      • Parenthesis - additional information that is added to a sentence; if it is removed, the sentence still makes sense

      Common misconception

      Pupils may want to include quotes from bystanders or other interested parties at the event.

      Ensure pupils know that there will be a specific section devoted to quotes from bystanders in another part of the journalistic report.

      Teacher tip

      Pupils may enjoy researching further information about the Titanic's size, strength and speed.

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      Prior knowledge starter quiz

      6 Questions

      Q1.
      Tick the definition of subject-specific vocabulary.

      a sentence starter followed by a comma
      words and phraseology that journalists use in their reports
      Correct answer: vocabulary associated with a subject

      Q2.
      Tick the definition of journalistic language.

      a sentence starter followed by a comma
      Correct answer: words and phraseology that journalists use in their reports
      vocabulary associated with a subject

      Q3.
      Tick the definition of a fronted adverbial.

      Correct answer: a sentence starter followed by a comma
      words and phraseology that journalists use in their reports
      vocabulary associated with a subject

      Q4.
      Match the types of fronted adverbials to their examples.

      Correct Answer:'and' formal fronted adverbial,In addition to this,

      In addition to this,

      Correct Answer:'but' formal fronted adverbial,In spite of this,

      In spite of this,

      Correct Answer:fronted adverbial of cause,Consequently,

      Consequently,

      Correct Answer:viewpoint fronted adverbial,Of significant note,

      Of significant note,

      Q5.
      Match the terms to their definitions:

      Correct Answer:general,the most basic, necessary information

      the most basic, necessary information

      Correct Answer:specific,detailed facts and information

      detailed facts and information

      Correct Answer:paragraph,a number of sentences in one section

      a number of sentences in one section

      Q6.
      Tick the sentence that uses parenthesis demarcated using brackets correctly.

      Correct answer: Titanic (designed by Thomas Andrews) is the largest floating vessel ever built.
      (Titanic) designed by Thomas Andrews is the largest floating vessel ever built.
      Titanic designed by Thomas Andrews is the largest floating (vessel ever built).

      6 Questions

      Q1.
      Match the parts of the recount paragraph to their definitions:

      Correct Answer:introductory sentence,introduces what the paragraph will be about

      introduces what the paragraph will be about

      Correct Answer:specific information,gives the reader detailed facts about the topic

      gives the reader detailed facts about the topic

      Correct Answer:linking sentence,links on to the next paragraph

      links on to the next paragraph

      Q2.
      Tick the relative pronouns.

      magnificent
      Correct answer: who
      if
      because
      Correct answer: which

      Q3.
      Identify the verb in this sentence: 'The cat sat on the mat.'

      the
      cat
      Correct answer: sat
      on
      mat

      Q4.
      Match the terms to their definitions:

      Correct Answer:active voice,a sentence in which the subject does or is the verb

      a sentence in which the subject does or is the verb

      Correct Answer:passive voice,a sentence where the subject receives the action of the verb

      a sentence where the subject receives the action of the verb

      Correct Answer:first person,the 'I/we' perspective

      the 'I/we' perspective

      Correct Answer:third person,the 'he/she/it/they' perspective

      the 'he/she/it/they' perspective

      Q5.
      Which of these sentences are written in the passive voice?

      The crew collected passengers' luggage.
      Correct answer: Passengers' luggage was collected by the crew.
      Correct answer: The ship was designed by a team of experts.
      Experts designed the ship.

      Q6.
      Which of these facts should not be included in the recount paragraph about the ship's construction?

      Titanic was designed by Thomas Andrews.
      Titanic was built at the Harland and Wolff Shipyard.
      Correct answer: Titanic set sail on April 10th 1912.
      Titanic has a powerful steam engine.

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