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      'The Twisted Tree': how the writer builds tension

      Lesson details

      Learning outcome

      I can explain how tension is built in 'The Twisted Tree'.

      Key learning points

      1. The novel gets more frightening and tense as it progresses, because of the increasing threat to Martha's life.
      2. Writers often raise tension by introducing uncertainty, conflict or time pressure into stories.
      3. Inferences should be developed to include additional interpretations.
      4. Burge uses elements of the Gothic to raise the tension when Martha enters the twisted tree for the first time.

      Keywords

      • Inference - a conclusion you reach by applying logic to the evidence you are given

      • Tension - a feeling of nervousness or worry when reading a text

      • The Gothic - a style of writing that involves dark, mysterious and supernatural themes

      • Time pressure - introduction of a deadline or time limit for characters to achieve their goals

      Common misconception

      Pupils might believe that tension in a story is only created through dramatic events or actions.

      Tension can also be built through subtle elements like descriptive language, sensory details and the anticipation of what might happen next.

      Teacher tip

      You could encourage pupils to use a tension graph to visually plot how tension rises in books or movies they have recently engaged with as an additional activity for Learning Cycle 2.

      Equipment

      You will need access to the text 'The Twisted Tree' by Rachel Burge, published by Hot Key Books, 2019

      Content guidance

      Depiction or discussion of sensitive content

      Supervision

      Adult supervision recommended

      Licence

      This content is © Oak National Academy Limited (2026), licensed on Open Government Licence version 3.0
      except where otherwise stated. See Oak's terms & conditions
      (Collection 2).

      Lesson video

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      Prior knowledge starter quiz

      6 Questions

      Q1.
      Stories typically include an exposition, rising action, climax, falling action and a resolution. This structure is typically referred to as a narrative ...

      Correct answer: arc.
      squiggle.
      curve.
      circle.

      Q2.
      Which definition best describes the resolution in the structure of a story?

      where the problems are introduced and tension rises
      where the writer describes the setting and characters
      the high point of the action and tension
      Correct answer: where the problems are resolved

      Q3.
      Which word best describes the overall tone of the Gothic genre?

      excited
      Correct answer: mysterious
      Correct answer: dark
      boring

      Q4.
      What is an inference?

      a guess without any evidence
      a direct statement from a text
      Correct answer: a conclusion based on evidence and reasoning
      a summary of a text

      Q5.
      Which of the below are reasonable synonyms of the word 'jeering'?

      Correct answer: taunting
      Correct answer: mocking
      sharing
      swearing

      Q6.
      The Gothic as a genre first appeared in the century.

      17th
      Correct answer: 18th
      19th
      20th

      6 Questions

      Q1.
      What is tension?

      a happy feeling from knowing something good will happen
      Correct answer: a feeling of nervousness or worry
      a feeling of sadness about a loss
      a feeling of anger or rage usually about an injustice

      Q2.
      What is one way writers create tension?

      by making everything predictable
      by ending the story early
      by describing happy scenes
      Correct answer: by introducing uncertainty

      Q3.
      Writers can introduce tension by adding time pressure, uncertainty or conflict. Match these to examples from 'The Twisted Tree'.

      Correct Answer:uncertainty,Stig and Gandalf have been attacked, potentially lethally
      Correct Answer:time pressure,Mormor must return to the underworld before the portal closes
      Correct Answer:conflict,Martha defeats the draugr with the help of the ravens

      Q4.
      Which word describes a style of writing with dark, mysterious and supernatural themes?

      romantic
      adventure
      Correct answer: Gothic
      Norse

      Q5.
      Throughout the story of 'The Twisted Tree' the tension ...

      Correct answer: increases.
      decreases.
      stays the same.
      increases and decreases equally.

      Q6.
      In 'The Twisted Tree', the twisted tree itself is described as 'jeering' at Martha. What device is this?

      Correct answer: personification
      metaphor
      simile
      alliteration

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