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'The Twisted Tree': how the writer builds tension

I can explain how tension is built in 'The Twisted Tree'.

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'The Twisted Tree': how the writer builds tension

I can explain how tension is built in 'The Twisted Tree'.

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Lesson details

Key learning points

  1. The novel gets more frightening and tense as it progresses, because of the increasing threat to Martha's life.
  2. Writers often raise tension by introducing uncertainty, conflict or time pressure into stories.
  3. Inferences should be developed to include additional interpretations.
  4. Burge uses elements of the Gothic to raise the tension when Martha enters the twisted tree for the first time.

Keywords

  • Inference - a conclusion you reach by applying logic to the evidence you are given

  • Tension - a feeling of nervousness or worry when reading a text

  • The Gothic - a style of writing that involves dark, mysterious and supernatural themes

  • Time pressure - introduction of a deadline or time limit for characters to achieve their goals

Common misconception

Pupils might believe that tension in a story is only created through dramatic events or actions.

Tension can also be built through subtle elements like descriptive language, sensory details and the anticipation of what might happen next.


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You could encourage pupils to use a tension graph to visually plot how tension rises in books or movies they have recently engaged with as an additional activity for Learning Cycle 2.
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Equipment

You will need access to the text 'The Twisted Tree' by Rachel Burge, published by Hot Key Books, 2019

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Content guidance

  • Depiction or discussion of sensitive content
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Supervision

Adult supervision recommended

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6 Questions

Q1.
Stories typically include an exposition, rising action, climax, falling action and a resolution. This structure is typically referred to as a narrative ...
Correct answer: arc.
squiggle.
curve.
circle.
Q2.
Which definition best describes the resolution in the structure of a story?
where the problems are introduced and tension rises
where the writer describes the setting and characters
the high point of the action and tension
Correct answer: where the problems are resolved
Q3.
Which word best describes the overall tone of the Gothic genre?
excited
Correct answer: mysterious
Correct answer: dark
boring
Q4.
What is an inference?
a guess without any evidence
a direct statement from a text
Correct answer: a conclusion based on evidence and reasoning
a summary of a text
Q5.
Which of the below are reasonable synonyms of the word 'jeering'?
Correct answer: taunting
Correct answer: mocking
sharing
swearing
Q6.
The Gothic as a genre first appeared in the century.
17th
Correct answer: 18th
19th
20th

6 Questions

Q1.
What is tension?
a happy feeling from knowing something good will happen
Correct answer: a feeling of nervousness or worry
a feeling of sadness about a loss
a feeling of anger or rage usually about an injustice
Q2.
What is one way writers create tension?
by making everything predictable
by ending the story early
by describing happy scenes
Correct answer: by introducing uncertainty
Q3.
Writers can introduce tension by adding time pressure, uncertainty or conflict. Match these to examples from 'The Twisted Tree'.
Correct Answer:uncertainty,Stig and Gandalf have been attacked, potentially lethally
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Stig and Gandalf have been attacked, potentially lethally

Correct Answer:time pressure,Mormor must return to the underworld before the portal closes
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Mormor must return to the underworld before the portal closes

Correct Answer:conflict,Martha defeats the draugr with the help of the ravens
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Martha defeats the draugr with the help of the ravens

Q4.
Which word describes a style of writing with dark, mysterious and supernatural themes?
romantic
adventure
Correct answer: Gothic
Norse
Q5.
Throughout the story of 'The Twisted Tree' the tension ...
Correct answer: increases.
decreases.
stays the same.
increases and decreases equally.
Q6.
In 'The Twisted Tree', the twisted tree itself is described as 'jeering' at Martha. What device is this?
Correct answer: personification
metaphor
simile
alliteration