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  • Year 10
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Analysing extended responses to the Eduqas poetry anthology

I can recognise excellent writing practice in a model response.

Lesson 30 of 33
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  • Year 10
  • Eduqas

Analysing extended responses to the Eduqas poetry anthology

I can recognise excellent writing practice in a model response.

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Lesson details

Key learning points

  1. Analysing model answers allows us to explore how we might frame ideas and how to avoid misconceptions.
  2. An effective introduction should clearly set out the argument of the essay in relation to the question.
  3. One misconception is to interweave quotations from both poems but not effectively analyse them.
  4. Another misconception is to point out differences between the poems but not effectively analyse them.

Keywords

  • To compare - to note the similarities and/or dissimilarities between two or more things

  • Context - the circumstances in which a text was produced

  • Thematically - a way that relates to the subjects or themes of something

  • Misconception - a view or opinion that is incorrect because it is based on faulty thinking or understanding

Common misconception

As long as I include quotations from both poems and mention some similarities or differences, I’m doing a good comparative analysis.

Without analysis, the response does not explain how or why the poets present their ideas, or what effects those choices have. This limits the depth and quality of the comparison.


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Equipment

You will need a copy of the Eduqas 2025 Anthology for this lesson.

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Prior knowledge starter quiz

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6 Questions

Q1.
Textual detail in a written response is ...

Correct answer: the evidence you use to support your answer.
the detail you put into an answer.
how detailed the writer has been in their text.

Q2.
Which example uses correlative conjunctions?

Whereas Heaney explores the nostalgia of childhood.
Blake explores the impact of societal institutions.
Correct answer: Both Blake and Heaney explore the connections between childhood and nature.

Q3.
Which of these are examples of comparative discourse markers?

Correct answer: likewise
furthermore
thus
Correct answer: contrastingly

Q4.
Which of the following is the opening line to William Blake's 'The Schoolboy'?

"I was a cottage maiden Hardened by sun and air"
"I wandered lonely as a cloud That floats on high o'er vales and hills"
Correct answer: "I love to rise in a summer morn"
"When, in disgrace with fortune and men’s eyes,"

Q5.
When writing a comparative response you should...

always include one poem only in each paragraph.
Correct answer: weave ideas about both poems into paragraphs.
begin by comparing a key quote.

Q6.
What is the name of Seamus Heaney's poem that features in the Eduqas anthology?

'I wandered Lonely as a Cloud'
'The Schoolboy'
Correct answer: 'Blackberry-Picking'
Kamikaze'
'Decompostion'

Assessment exit quiz

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6 Questions

Q1.
What does 'to compare' mean?

to come up with alternative perspectives so that you have more than one
Correct answer: to note the similarities or differences between two or more things
to analyse two or more texts together

Q2.
What is a thesis in an essay introduction?

a poetic device
a quotation from the poem
Correct answer: a clear argument that guides the essay
a summary of the poem

Q3.
is the circumstances in which a text was produced.

Correct Answer: Context, context

Q4.
In a comparative response why should you avoid making statements like "both poems use imagery"?

because all poems use imagery
because saying that shows you don’t know what imagery is
Correct answer: because you should explore what kind of imagery and how it creates meaning
because imagery isn’t a poetic technique

Q5.
Is the statement true of false? Context is more effective when it is linked to the poet’s themes or message.

Correct Answer: true, t, T, True

Q6.
Is the statement true or false? One strong comparison is more effective than listing many vague ones.

Correct Answer: true, t, True, T

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