Analysing extended responses to the Eduqas poetry anthology
Lesson details
Learning outcome
I can recognise excellent writing practice in a model response.
Key learning points
- Analysing model answers allows us to explore how we might frame ideas and how to avoid misconceptions.
- An effective introduction should clearly set out the argument of the essay in relation to the question.
- One misconception is to interweave quotations from both poems but not effectively analyse them.
- Another misconception is to point out differences between the poems but not effectively analyse them.
Keywords
To compare - to note the similarities and/or dissimilarities between two or more things
Context - the circumstances in which a text was produced
Thematically - a way that relates to the subjects or themes of something
Misconception - a view or opinion that is incorrect because it is based on faulty thinking or understanding
Common misconception
As long as I include quotations from both poems and mention some similarities or differences, I’m doing a good comparative analysis.
Without analysis, the response does not explain how or why the poets present their ideas, or what effects those choices have. This limits the depth and quality of the comparison.
Teacher tip
If pupils have already written their own paragraphs or essays, Task A and Task B can be adapted to help them review and improve their own work.
Equipment
You will need a copy of the Eduqas 2025 Anthology for this lesson.
Licence
Lesson video
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Prior knowledge starter quiz
6 Questions
Q1.Textual detail in a written response is ...
Q2.Which example uses correlative conjunctions?
Q3.Which of these are examples of comparative discourse markers?
Q4.Which of the following is the opening line to William Blake's 'The Schoolboy'?
Q5.When writing a comparative response you should...
Q6.What is the name of Seamus Heaney's poem that features in the Eduqas anthology?
Assessment exit quiz
6 Questions
Q1.What does 'to compare' mean?
Q2.What is a thesis in an essay introduction?
Q3. is the circumstances in which a text was produced.
Q4.In a comparative response why should you avoid making statements like "both poems use imagery"?
Q5.Is the statement true of false? Context is more effective when it is linked to the poet’s themes or message.
Q6.Is the statement true or false? One strong comparison is more effective than listing many vague ones.
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