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  • Year 10
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Reviewing a written response on the Eduqas poetry anthology

I can reflect on and rewrite an extended written response comparing poems from the Eduqas anthology.

Lesson 33 of 33
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  • Year 10
  • Eduqas

Reviewing a written response on the Eduqas poetry anthology

I can reflect on and rewrite an extended written response comparing poems from the Eduqas anthology.

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Lesson details

Key learning points

  1. When writing an essay you should aim to write in a formal style as it can help to elevate your ideas.
  2. Your essay should have a clear line of argument and be well structured.
  3. An effective introduction will be focused, offer a clear thesis and link to main ideas in the question.
  4. A strong comparative paragraph will clearly compare two poems using precise vocabulary and discourse markers.
  5. A strong response will embed quotations smoothly and analyse language and structure, explaining their effects clearly.

Keywords

  • Style - in writing, this refers to the specific way language is used, including tone, word choice, and sentence structure

  • Formal - in writing, this means: avoiding slang or casual words and using precise vocabulary

  • Precise - in writing, this means: using the best words to explain the poet’s methods and effects

Common misconception

Once I’ve written my essay, I don’t need to think about it again.

When you have the opportunity to rewrite or redraft your work, you should take it! It helps you deepen your thinking, develop your ideas more clearly, and express yourself with greater precision. Writing is a process, not just a product.


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Prior knowledge starter quiz

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6 Questions

Q1.
When we compare, it can be useful to look for...

similarities only.
differences only.
Correct answer: both similarities and differences.

Q2.
Match the key elements of an analytical paragraph with the correct function.

Correct Answer:thesis,outlines argument of whole essay

outlines argument of whole essay

Correct Answer:topic sentence,outlines arguments of each paragraph

outlines arguments of each paragraph

Correct Answer:supporting detail,key language, form, structure or contextual detail

key language, form, structure or contextual detail

Correct Answer:concluding sentence,summarise argument in each paragraph

summarise argument in each paragraph

Q3.
When comparing poems your comparisons should focus on ...

methods.
quotations.
Correct answer: key ideas.

Q4.
A concluding sentence should …

rephrase the topic sentence.
give your opinion about the poem.
Correct answer: have a sharp focus on the writer's purpose.

Q5.
Topic sentences should ...

Correct answer: outline arguments in each paragraph.
include contextual detail.
Correct answer: include key question vocabulary.

Q6.
When writing a comparative response you should ...

Correct answer: weave ideas about both poems into paragraphs.
always include one poem only in each paragraph.
begin comparing a key quote.

Assessment exit quiz

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6 Questions

Q1.
What does writing in a formal style mean?

using slang and casual words
Correct answer: using precise vocabulary and full sentences
writing like you speak
using short, incomplete sentences

Q2.
Which word best describes vocabulary that clearly expresses ideas?

vague
casual
Correct answer: precise
slang

Q3.
Which of these is an example of precise vocabulary?

The poet’s words are kind of sad.
Correct answer: The poet’s diction conveys melancholy.
The poem is good.
I think the poem is interesting.

Q4.
Which could be considered a more precise and formal way to rewrite this informal phrase: “pretty upset”?

“slightly angry”
"somewhat mad"
Correct answer: “emotionally distressed”
"kind of sad”

Q5.
Which discourse marker would best link different ideas about the poems?

similarly
Correct answer: in contrast
additionally
futhermore

Q6.
Is the statement true or false? Once you've written your essay, there's no need to revise or edit it.

Correct Answer: false, f, False, F