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      Writing the beginning of a story, introducing character and setting: 'Jack and the Beanstalk'

      Lesson details

      Learning outcome

      I can write the beginning of a traditional tale, introducing the characters and setting.

      Key learning points

      1. Traditional tales are mostly told in the past tense
      2. The beginning of a story introduces the main characters, setting and plot
      3. Two ideas can be joined using a joining word, 'and'
      4. Two adjective sentences need a comma in between the two adjectives, such as 'noisy, hungry cow'
      5. Exclamation marks can be used to show anger, such as when mother throws the beans out of the window

      Keywords

      • Beginning - the start of something

      • Character - a person or an animal in a story

      • Setting - where the story takes place

      • Plot - what happens in the story

      • Comma - a punctuation mark used to list two adjectives or after a fronted adverbial

      Common misconception

      Pupils may just use 'and' to add on another word or phrase rather than another sentence.

      Show two different sentences as two complete ideas. Ensure pupils understand that each sentence needs to make sense on its own.

      Teacher tip

      Adjust the success criteria and sentence scaffolds to meet the writing expectations you want your pupils to achieve. Ideally, your pupils will have completed Lesson 7 (retelling using a story mountain) prior to this lesson so they will have a plan to work from when writing in this lesson.

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      Prior knowledge starter quiz

      6 Questions

      Q1.
      Change the verb in this sentence so that it is in the past tense: I run to the park.

      running
      will run
      Correct answer: ran
      runned

      Q2.
      Identify the noun in this sentence: The shiny, golden harp yelled.

      shiny
      golden
      Correct answer: harp
      yelled

      Q3.
      Identify the adjectives in this sentence: The shiny, golden harp yelled.

      Correct answer: shiny
      Correct answer: golden
      harp
      yelled

      Q4.
      Match these words to their definition.

      Correct Answer:noun,a naming word for people, places or things
      Correct Answer:adjective,describes a noun
      Correct Answer:verb,a doing or being word
      Correct Answer:adverb,describes a verb

      Q5.
      Tick the expanded noun phrase that has the comma in the correct place.

      noisy, hungry, cow
      Correct answer: noisy, hungry cow
      noisy hungry cow,
      noisy hungry cow

      Q6.
      Correct the spelling of the word in bold. The giant woz angry.

      Correct Answer: was, Was

      6 Questions

      Q1.
      Which of these sequencing phrases might you use at the start of a fairy tale?

      Finally,
      Happily ever after,
      Correct answer: Once upon a time,
      Next,

      Q2.
      Match these words to the correct punctuation.

      Correct Answer:comma,,
      Correct Answer:full stop,.
      Correct Answer:question mark,?
      Correct Answer:exclamation mark,!

      Q3.
      Identify the joining word in this sentence: The golden harp yelled and the giant woke up.

      golden
      harp
      Correct answer: and
      the
      giant

      Q4.
      When might you use an exclamation mark at the end of a sentence?

      Correct answer: to express strong emotion
      to express a fact or opinion
      to ask the reader for an answer

      Q5.
      What should we do before writing a story?

      read the story again
      Correct answer: practise saying your sentences out loud
      write everything down very quickly
      sing a song

      Q6.
      Complete this sentence: The beginning of a story...

      starts with a song.
      Correct answer: introduces the main characters, setting and plot.
      introduces the villain.
      introduces the problem in the plot.

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