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      Writing the second recount paragraph of a journalistic report about the Titanic

      Lesson details

      Learning outcome

      I can write the second recount paragraph of a journalistic report.

      Key learning points

      1. The purpose of the recount section is to engage the reader and provide them with specific facts about the topic.
      2. Using a range of different sentence structures enhances text cohesion.
      3. Using different types of complex sentence enables us to share information with our reader in different ways.
      4. When writing, we should use our plans and success criteria so our writing can be as effective as possible.

      Keywords

      • Complex sentence - a sentence formed of at least one main clause and a subordinate clause

      • Adverbial complex sentence - a sentence formed of a main clause and an adverbial subordinate clause

      • Non-finite complex sentence - a sentence formed of a main clause and a non-finite subordinate clause

      • Relative complex sentence - a sentence formed of a main clause and a relative subordinate clause

      Common misconception

      Pupils may find it challenging to identify the types of complex sentences.

      The first learning cycle focuses on reviewing the three types of complex sentence previously learnt in the unit.

      Teacher tip

      Give pupils opportunities to share their ideas with their peers to allow for collaborative vocabulary and sentence generation.

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      Prior knowledge starter quiz

      6 Questions

      Q1.
      Match the terms to their definitions.

      Correct Answer:main clause,a group of words that contains a verb and makes sense

      a group of words that contains a verb and makes sense

      Correct Answer:subordinate clause,a group of words containing a verb that doesn't make sense

      a group of words containing a verb that doesn't make sense

      Correct Answer:non-finite (-ing) clause,a type of subordinate clause that starts with an -ing verb

      a type of subordinate clause that starts with an -ing verb

      Q2.
      Identify the subordinating conjunctions.

      and
      Correct answer: before
      which
      but
      Correct answer: as

      Q3.
      Identify the co-ordinating conjunctions.

      Correct answer: and
      because
      although
      Correct answer: but
      Correct answer: or

      Q4.
      Match the complex sentence types to their definitions.

      Correct Answer:adverbial complex sentence,sentences with a main clause & adverbial subordinate clause

      sentences with a main clause & adverbial subordinate clause

      Correct Answer:non-finite complex sentence,sentences with a main clause & non-finite subordinate clause

      sentences with a main clause & non-finite subordinate clause

      Correct Answer:relative complex sentence,sentences with a main clause & relative subordinate clause

      sentences with a main clause & relative subordinate clause

      Q5.
      Identify the adverbial complex sentence.

      The Titanic, which has ten decks, took three years to build.
      Correct answer: Before the ship set sail, crowds gathered at the quayside.
      Waving at the departing ship, onlookers called their final goodbyes.

      Q6.
      Identify the non-finite complex sentence.

      The Titanic, which has ten decks, took three years to build.
      Before the ship set sail, crowds gathered at the quayside.
      Correct answer: Waving at the departing ship, onlookers called their final goodbyes.

      6 Questions

      Q1.
      What is the purpose of the recount paragraphs?

      Correct answer: to engage the reader
      to give the reader general information
      Correct answer: to give the reader specific facts

      Q2.
      Which type of sentence is formed of one main clause?

      Correct answer: simple
      compound
      complex

      Q3.
      Which type of sentence is formed of two main clauses joined by a co-ordinating conjunction?

      simple
      Correct answer: compound
      complex

      Q4.
      Which type of sentence is formed of at least one main clause and a subordinate clause?

      simple
      compound
      Correct answer: complex

      Q5.
      Match the key words to their definitions.

      Correct Answer:complex sentence,sentence formed of a main clause and a subordinate clause

      sentence formed of a main clause and a subordinate clause

      Correct Answer:adverbial complex sentence,sentence with a main clause & adverbial subordinate clause

      sentence with a main clause & adverbial subordinate clause

      Correct Answer:non-finite complex sentence,sentence with a main clause & non-finite subordinate clause

      sentence with a main clause & non-finite subordinate clause

      Correct Answer:relative complex sentence,sentence with a main clause & relative subordinate clause

      sentence with a main clause & relative subordinate clause

      Q6.
      Put the stages of the writing process in the correct order.

      1 - plan
      2 - draft
      3 - re-write
      4 - edit

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