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Planning a written response on human nature in Golding's 'Lord of the Flies'

I can use single paragraph outlines to plan a response.

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Planning a written response on human nature in Golding's 'Lord of the Flies'

I can use single paragraph outlines to plan a response.

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Key learning points

  1. Golding uses the novel to explore the true nature of human beings.
  2. A cohesive argument unpacks one 'big idea' - each paragraph should work with the others to prove the 'big idea'.
  3. Single paragraph outlines contain a topic sentence, supporting detail and a summary sentence.
  4. Supporting details should contain quotes, along with the writer's methods, key vocabulary and contextual information.
  5. A single paragraph outline should be planned for each section of your response and can take up to five minutes to plan.

Keywords

  • Cohesive - when all the ideas are united and work together to support one larger argument

  • Innate - instinctive and natural

  • Primal - describing an early stage in human development

Common misconception

Students often think that characters are not methods. They tend to think of methods as just 'similes' or 'metaphors'.

Any choice that the writer makes consciously is a method. This includes their use of characterisation. Anything the character says or does is a method.


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For the feedback task in Task B, you could ask students to swap their plans with a partner and get them to do some peer assessment using the criteria if this would be preferable to self-assessment. You could ask them to add add an idea to their partner's plan in a different coloured pen.
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Equipment

A copy of the Faber & Faber 1997 edition of 'Lord of the Flies' is essential for this lesson.

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Content guidance

  • Depiction or discussion of violence or suffering
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Supervision

Adult supervision recommended

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Licence

This content is © Oak National Academy Limited (2025), licensed on Open Government Licence version 3.0 except where otherwise stated. See Oak's terms & conditions (Collection 2).

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6 Questions

Q1.
The writer's is anything the writer does consciously - any creative decision they make.
Correct Answer: method
Q2.
What physical characteristics does Jack have in 'Lord of the Flies'?
golden skin
black hair
Correct answer: freckles
Correct answer: red hair
tanned skin
Q3.
Which of the following characters are lower-class in 'Lord of the Flies'?
Ralph
Correct answer: Piggy
Jack
Samneric
Q4.
What does 'to ostracise' mean?
to include and support
Correct answer: to leave someone out deliberately
to behave in a savage and cruel manner
to take charge of a situation
Q5.
What does Ralph represent in 'Lord of the Flies'?
dictatorship
peace
savagery
Correct answer: civilisation
Correct answer: democracy
Q6.
What is an allegory?
a brief statement that refers to a character or incident from another text
comparing two things in order to show the difference between them
a short novel or a very long short story
Correct answer: a story, poem, or picture that can be interpreted to reveal a hidden meaning
a short story typically with animals as characters, conveying a moral lesson

6 Questions

Q1.
Which of the following is a synonym for the word 'innate'?
organic
Correct answer: inherent
contrived
unfortunate
Q2.
A essay is one in which all of the ideas and opinions expressed work together to feed into one 'bigger idea' or argument.
Correct Answer: cohesive
Q3.
Which of the following does not need to be included in the supporting detail in a paragraph outline?
Correct answer: a plot summary
potential vocabulary you might want to use
quotations from the text
the writer's use of methods
the effects of the writer's use of methods
Q4.
A introduces the main idea in your paragraph - what you will be proving.
Correct Answer: topic sentence
Q5.
What is the following sentence an example of: "Thus, Golding suggests that man has an innate evil inside, that emerges when rules and laws are removed?"
topic sentence
thesis statement
supporting detail
Correct answer: concluding sentence
Q6.
What is the writer's intention?
their main character
Correct answer: their aims in writing the text
the context of the text
how convey their message
their life story and how this influences the text