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Lesson 10 of 12
  • Year 11
  • Edexcel

Analysing an extended and developed response on Edexcel's Belonging anthology

I can identify how a model answer about the Edexcel Belonging poetry meets a success criteria.

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Lesson 10 of 12
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  • Year 11
  • Edexcel

Analysing an extended and developed response on Edexcel's Belonging anthology

I can identify how a model answer about the Edexcel Belonging poetry meets a success criteria.

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Lesson details

Key learning points

  1. Topic sentences need to be clear, comparative and linked to the question.
  2. Relevant quotations from the text are used to justify arguments.
  3. Context can be used to develop arguments and shape our interpretations of a text.
  4. Responses should focus on the intention of the author to avoid re-telling the story of the poem.
  5. Comparative conjunctions should be used to compare language, form and structure of poems.

Keywords

  • Nuanced - characterised by subtle distinctions or variations

  • Evaluate - assess the value, significance or quality of something in relation to something else

  • Uphold - support or maintain a belief, decision or idea

  • Challenge - question or dispute a belief, decision or idea

  • Subtle - less obvious or more complex.

Common misconception

Context is required in every paragraph of a comparative analytical response.

Context is important to include in your response but it isn't necessary in every paragraph. In order to avoid 'bolt-on' context, it should only be used when it is relevant to the point you're making in that paragraph.


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You could consider stretching this lesson across two sessions. Encourage pupils to complete the task 'cold' by answering the question used by the model answers in the lesson, and then compare Alex and Laura's responses to their own.
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Equipment

You will need access to a copy of the Edexcel GCSE Poetry Anthology ('Belonging' cluster).

Content guidance

  • Depiction or discussion of sensitive content
  • Depiction or discussion of peer pressure or bullying

Supervision

Adult supervision recommended

Licence

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