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      Writing the second paragraph of a persuasive advert

      Lesson details

      Learning outcome

      I can write a persuasive paragraph that details the health benefits of a product.

      Key learning points

      1. It is crucial to communicate the unique selling point of a product.
      2. A persuasive advert should explain the benefits of a product to the reader, e.g. health benefits.
      3. For a healthy food product, it is crucial to detail ingredients, nutrients and health benefits.
      4. A formal fronted adverbial can be used to contrast information within a main clause.

      Keywords

      • Health benefit - refers to the positive effects on a person's health gained from food, treatment, or an activity

      • Formal fronted adverbial - a sentence starter followed by a comma which is formal in tone and often found in non-fiction texts

      • Contrast - to highlight a difference, often between items or elements in juxtaposition

      • Unique selling point - this is what makes a product better than others on the market

      Common misconception

      Children may struggle with using a formal fronted adverbial to contrast appropriately.

      Model a formal fronted adverbial of contrast used incorrectly (reiterate same point in main clause). Ask children to analyse and correct it.

      Teacher tip

      Recap scientific knowledge on nutrition prior to the lesson.

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      Lesson video

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      Prior knowledge starter quiz

      6 Questions

      Q1.
      What is the unique selling point for the chocolate energy ball?

      It is coated in chocolate.
      It is made of oat, nuts and dried fruits.
      It tastes delicious.
      Correct answer: It is made from chocolate and it is healthy.

      Q2.
      Which methods help us when preparing to write?

      Correct answer: Revisiting the information we need to include.
      Correct answer: Deciding which grammatical techniques we want to use.
      Writing our first idea down.
      Correct answer: Orally rehearsing sentences.
      Trying to recall everything from memory as we write.

      Q3.
      Match the vocabulary to the correct definition.

      Correct Answer:ingredients,any of the food or substances combined to make an item from

      any of the food or substances combined to make an item from

      Correct Answer:nutrients,a substance that provides nourishment essential for life

      a substance that provides nourishment essential for life

      Correct Answer:food groups,categories into which types of food are classified

      categories into which types of food are classified

      Q4.
      What are the main ingredients inside the energy ball?

      chicken
      Correct answer: oats
      Correct answer: nuts
      potatoes
      Correct answer: dried fruits

      Q5.
      How does the energy ball benefit health?

      It makes your hair and nails grow stronger.
      Correct answer: It provides energy, builds muscles and supports digestion.
      It makes you more flexible.

      Q6.
      Which of the following persuasive techniques are used throughout a persuasive advert?

      Correct answer: interesting synonyms
      rhyme
      Correct answer: superlatives
      Correct answer: exaggerated language
      onomatopoeia

      6 Questions

      Q1.
      What should be included in the second paragraph of a persuasive advert?

      Correct answer: the ingredients of the energy ball
      Correct answer: the nutrients the energy ball provides
      what the chocolate tastes like
      Correct answer: the health benefits for the body

      Q2.
      Match the vocabulary to the correct definition.

      Correct Answer:health benefits,the positive effects on a person's health gained from food

      the positive effects on a person's health gained from food

      Correct Answer:ingredients,any of the food or substances combined to make an item from

      any of the food or substances combined to make an item from

      Correct Answer:nutrients,a substance that provides nourishment essential for life

      a substance that provides nourishment essential for life

      Correct Answer:food groups,categories into which types of food are classified

      categories into which types of food are classified

      Q3.
      What are the three main nutrients we are focusing on when communicating the health benefits of the energy ball?

      Correct answer: carbohydrates rich in fibre
      Correct answer: healthy fats
      vitamins and minerals
      water
      Correct answer: protein

      Q4.
      What are the key health benefits of the energy ball?

      Correct answer: It provides the body with energy.
      It makes hair grow longer.
      Correct answer: It helps to build and repair muscles.
      Correct answer: It supports the digestive system.
      It makes you jump higher.

      Q5.
      What is a formal fronted adverbial?

      detail added to describe the preceding noun
      an adverbial signalling the order of events
      Correct answer: a sentence starter followed by a comma which is formal in tone

      Q6.
      Select the formal fronted adverbials that could be used to contrast information in the main clause.

      Correct answer: Despite...,
      Correct answer: Although...,
      Importantly,
      Correct answer: Even though...,
      Interestingly,

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