Editing the main body of a persuasive letter, inspired by a text
Lesson details
Learning outcome
I can edit the main body of a persuasive letter, inspired by a text.
Key learning points
- The purpose of an editing lesson is to improve your writing and make necessary corrections.
- Vocabulary, grammar and punctuation can be changed to make writing more effective.
- Editing is a vital element of the writing process.
Keywords
Editing - the process of improving writing to improve text flow and overall quality
Grammar - the set of rules that govern a language
Punctuation - a set of standardised symbols and marks used in written language to structure sentences
Sentence structure - the way that words are arranged within sentences to convey meaning
Vocabulary - the language choices made by a writer
Common misconception
Pupils may find it difficult to identify which elements of their writing to edit.
Ensure that pupils know the difference between different punctuation marks, different sentence structures, the meaning of 'ambitious vocabulary' and age-appropriate spelling rules.
Teacher tip
Having pupils edit with a peer in mixed attainment pairings may lead to a more thorough editing process.
Licence
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Prior knowledge starter quiz
6 Questions
Q1.'Text cohesion' refers to which of the following?
Q2.Match the terms to their definitions.
a set of standardised symbols and marks to structure sentences
language choices made by a writer
how words are arranged within sentences to convey meaning
Q3.Select the sentence that uses an apostrophe for possession correctly.
Q4.Select the fronted adverbial of cause.
Q5.Select the formal fronted adverbials:
Q6.Match the subordinate clauses to their examples:
as social media use has increased
reporting on research of children's mental health in the UK
which is a key issue for voters
Assessment exit quiz
6 Questions
Q1.Match the keywords to their definitions.
the process of improving writing to improve text flow
the set of rules that govern a language
standardised symbols and marks used in written language
how words are arranged and organised to convey meaning
the language choices made by the writer
Q2.Which of these are different functions of a comma?
Q3.Which of these are types of language choice that you would use in a persuasive letter?
Q4.Which of these are part of the editing process?
Q5.Select the correct spelling of this key word:
Q6.Which punctuation mark is used to separate a main clause from a subordinate clause?
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