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      Editing the main body of a persuasive letter, inspired by a text

      Lesson details

      Learning outcome

      I can edit the main body of a persuasive letter, inspired by a text.

      Key learning points

      1. The purpose of an editing lesson is to improve your writing and make necessary corrections.
      2. Vocabulary, grammar and punctuation can be changed to make writing more effective.
      3. Editing is a vital element of the writing process.

      Keywords

      • Editing - the process of improving writing to improve text flow and overall quality

      • Grammar - the set of rules that govern a language

      • Punctuation - a set of standardised symbols and marks used in written language to structure sentences

      • Sentence structure - the way that words are arranged within sentences to convey meaning

      • Vocabulary - the language choices made by a writer

      Common misconception

      Pupils may find it difficult to identify which elements of their writing to edit.

      Ensure that pupils know the difference between different punctuation marks, different sentence structures, the meaning of 'ambitious vocabulary' and age-appropriate spelling rules.

      Teacher tip

      Having pupils edit with a peer in mixed attainment pairings may lead to a more thorough editing process.

      Licence

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      Lesson video

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      Prior knowledge starter quiz

      6 Questions

      Q1.
      'Text cohesion' refers to which of the following?

      it explains when, where or how something happened
      Correct answer: the flow of a text
      a sentence formed of a main clause and a subordinate clause

      Q2.
      Match the terms to their definitions.

      Correct Answer:punctuation,a set of standardised symbols and marks to structure sentences
      Correct Answer:vocabulary,language choices made by a writer
      Correct Answer:sentence structure,how words are arranged within sentences to convey meaning

      Q3.
      Select the sentence that uses an apostrophe for possession correctly.

      Correct answer: Children's wellbeing is a key issue for voters.
      Childrens' wellbeing is a key issue for voters.
      Childrens wellbeing is a key issue for voter's.

      Q4.
      Select the fronted adverbial of cause.

      Furthermore,
      However,
      Despite this,
      Correct answer: Consequently,

      Q5.
      Select the formal fronted adverbials:

      Correct answer: Furthermore,
      Correct answer: However,
      Correct answer: Despite this,
      Consequently,

      Q6.
      Match the subordinate clauses to their examples:

      Correct Answer:adverbial subordinate,as social media use has increased
      Correct Answer:non-finite subordinate,reporting on research of children's mental health in the UK
      Correct Answer:relative subordinate,which is a key issue for voters

      6 Questions

      Q1.
      Match the keywords to their definitions.

      Correct Answer:editing,the process of improving writing to improve text flow
      Correct Answer:grammar,the set of rules that govern a language
      Correct Answer:punctuation,standardised symbols and marks used in written language
      Correct Answer:sentence structure,how words are arranged and organised to convey meaning
      Correct Answer:vocabulary,the language choices made by the writer

      Q2.
      Which of these are different functions of a comma?

      Correct answer: to separate adjectives in an expanded noun phrase
      Correct answer: after a fronted adverbial
      Correct answer: to separate a non-finite subordinate clause from a main clause
      at the end of a sentence
      at the start of a sentence

      Q3.
      Which of these are types of language choice that you would use in a persuasive letter?

      Correct answer: fronted adverbials
      capital letters
      Correct answer: statistics
      Correct answer: a range of sentence types
      'show-not-tell'

      Q4.
      Which of these are part of the editing process?

      Correct answer: selecting which parts of the writing to improve
      rewriting the whole piece
      only correcting spelling mistakes
      Correct answer: making edits to punctuation, grammar and sentence structure

      Q5.
      Select the correct spelling of this key word:

      phisycal
      Correct answer: physical
      physicle
      physicel
      fysical

      Q6.
      Which punctuation mark is used to separate a main clause from a subordinate clause?

      full stop
      apostrophe
      Correct answer: comma
      exclamation mark

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