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      Generating vocabulary for Juliet's diary entry

      Lesson details

      Learning outcome

      I can generate vocabulary that precisely matches Juliet's first impressions of Romeo and her feelings about him at different points.

      Key learning points

      1. Writing is most successful when it is planned; this can include planning the vocabulary we may wish to include.
      2. Juliet's diary entries will cover meeting Romeo, discovering he is a Montague and agreeing to marry him.
      3. We will want to give Juliet's first impressions of Romeo by showing how she perceives him.
      4. We will want to show Juliet's emotions at different points in the narrative.
      5. We can use both rich vocabulary and show-not-tell to describe emotions.

      Keywords

      • Diary - a book in which a person keeps a daily record of events, experiences and emotions

      • Thesaurus - a book listing the synonyms of words

      • Emotions - strong feelings that result from a person's circumstances, mood or relationships with others

      • 'show-not-tell' - a writing technique for showing a character’s feelings with description of their actions, body language and facial expressions

      Common misconception

      Pupils may be confused by the structure of the diary entries proposed.

      We will be writing a diary entry for Juliet written after the ball and then a short second entry in which she reflects on the marriage agreement.

      Teacher tip

      Some pupils may find discussing romantic emotions awkward. Reassure them that this is totally normal; we are writing in role as Juliet, but we are not saying that we share her emotions!

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      Prior knowledge starter quiz

      6 Questions

      Q1.
      Why do Romeo and Juliet have to keep their romance secret?

      The Nurse disapproves of their relationship.
      Friar Laurence would tell their families about it.
      Correct answer: Their families are feuding.
      The Prince of Verona has forbidden it.

      Q2.
      When does Juliet find out that Romeo is a Montague?

      before she meets him
      before she kisses him
      Correct answer: after she kisses him
      when she is standing on the balcony

      Q3.
      Which of these is the best 'translation' of this piece of Juliet's dialogue? 'My only love sprung from my only hate.'

      Correct answer: the only person I love is from the family I'm supposed to hate
      he keeps coming back even though I hate him
      it's because I hate the Montagues that I love Romeo

      Q4.
      What kind of English is 'Romeo and Juliet' written in?

      Late Modern English
      Correct answer: Early Modern English
      Modern English
      Old English

      Q5.
      Why does Juliet say that the orchard might be 'death' to Romeo?

      because he might fall from the wall
      because there are poisonous plants
      because there are guard dogs
      Correct answer: because if he's seen by the Capulets, they'll kill him

      Q6.
      Which words complete this famous quote? 'Parting is such __________, that I shall say good night till it be morrow.'

      bitter sorrow
      a thing to borrow
      Correct answer: sweet sorrow
      sweet sadness

      6 Questions

      Q1.
      What is Juliet's first impression of Romeo?

      Correct answer: positive
      negative
      neutral

      Q2.
      Which words below are synonyms of 'perfect'?

      chiselled
      Correct answer: impeccable
      mesmerising
      Correct answer: flawless

      Q3.
      What does a thesaurus help us to find?

      correct spellings
      Correct answer: synonyms
      antonyms
      interesting words

      Q4.
      Match these emotion words to their meanings.

      Correct Answer:ecstatic,filled with joy

      filled with joy

      Correct Answer:yearning,longing for something

      longing for something

      Correct Answer:inconsolable,so upset you can't be comforted

      so upset you can't be comforted

      Correct Answer:melancholy,sadness

      sadness

      Q5.
      Which ideas would help us 'show-not-tell' Juliet's emotions when she learns that Romeo is a Montague?

      smiling from ear to ear
      Correct answer: stomach dropped
      too excited to sleep
      Correct answer: let out a gasp

      Q6.
      Which word could be used to describe Juliet's emotions as she writes in her diary when she gets home from the ball?

      Correct answer: desolate
      exhilarated
      mesmerising
      impeccable

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