Writing the second half of a setting description in 'Sherlock Holmes'
Lesson details
Learning outcome
I can write the second half of a setting description in 'Sherlock Holmes'.
Key learning points
- Writing is most successful when structure, content and vocabulary is planned.
- Oral rehearsal is an important step in the writing process.
- Fronted adverbials of place, prepositions and precise vocabulary paint the picture for a reader.
- Complex sentences can be used to show the connections between ideas.
- We can connect linked sentences using a semi-colon.
Keywords
Fronted adverbial of place - a sentence starter that tells the reader where something is or happens
Preposition - word or words that tell the reader where a noun is
Complex sentence - a sentence composed of a main clause and any subordinate clause
Semi-colon - a piece of punctuation that can join two closely-related main clauses
Common misconception
Pupils may struggle to convert notes into complete sentences.
Provide lots of time for oral rehearsal at each stage of the lesson and ensure children have access to vocabulary and plans used earlier in the unit.
Teacher tip
If pupils are not secure in using complex sentences, refer to our Year 6 Grammar unit 'Using five sentence types'. One slide is left lined so that you can complete shared writing with the class. You may wish to do this for the second paragraph too.
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Prior knowledge starter quiz
6 Questions
Q1.Which of the following are complex sentences?
Q2.Which sentences start with a fronted adverbial?
Q3.What features can be seen in the following sentence? 'On each corner, gas lamps flicker as ruffians wait in the shadows.'
Q4.What features can be seen in the following sentence? 'Below, the river snakes, winding through the vast metropolis.'
Q5.What type of complex sentence has been used to combine the following two ideas? 'On one side, dilapidated slums sit, overflowing with misery.'
Q6.Which sentences contain a preposition phrase?
Assessment exit quiz
6 Questions
Q1.What language feature is seen in the following sentence? 'As the gas lamp flickers, a light escapes from the house.'
Q2.Which of these is a purpose of a semi-colon?
Q3.After which word could the semi-colon be placed in the following sentence? 'The room is full of antiques on an ornate desk sits a pile of books.'
Q4.Which of these sentences could be joined by a semi-colon?
Q5.What features are seen in the following sentence? 'Inside, Holmes sits with a sigh; by the fire, Watson takes a sip of his drink.'
Q6.Which of these passages could include a semi-colon?
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The starter quiz will activate and check your pupils' prior knowledge, with versions available both with and without answers in PDF format.
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