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      Generating ambitious vocabulary for narrative writing

      Lesson details

      Learning outcome

      I can generate ambitious vocabulary to include in my narrative writing.

      Key learning points

      1. Precise vocabulary is used to accurately describe setting and characters.
      2. Some vocabulary choices are more precise and appropriate than others.
      3. Imagining colours as we write that might evoke feelings for the reader helps us choose vocabulary.
      4. Nouns are referred to in different ways to avoid repetition.

      Keywords

      • Noun - a person, place or thing

      • Adjective - a word that describes a noun

      • Verb - a doing or being word

      Common misconception

      Pupils may use adjective choices that are not precise enough or appropriate for a certain moment.

      Create a shared word bank for the characters at different moments that pupils can refer to.

      Teacher tip

      Ask children to share their vocabulary ideas using mini-whiteboards or vocally before showing the vocabulary on the slides. Encourage collaborative approaches to sharing and generating vocabulary.

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      Lesson video

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      Prior knowledge starter quiz

      6 Questions

      Q1.
      What is the definition of a noun?

      Lily
      an object
      a describing word
      Correct answer: a naming word for a person, place or thing

      Q2.
      An adjective describes a .

      Correct Answer: noun, Noun, nown

      Q3.
      What is the purpose of an adverb?

      An adverb describes characters.
      Correct answer: An adverb describes and adds extra detail to a verb.
      An adverb describes a noun.

      Q4.
      Match the word class to its example.

      Correct Answer:verb,played

      played

      Correct Answer:noun,moon

      moon

      Correct Answer:adverb,excitedly

      excitedly

      Correct Answer:adjective,empty

      empty

      Q5.
      Language in narrative writing is ...

      formal.
      Correct answer: descriptive.
      factual.

      Q6.
      The definition of 'positive' is ...

      something bad or unhappy.
      Correct answer: something good or happy.
      something that is neither good nor bad.

      6 Questions

      Q1.
      Who are the main characters in 'The Man on the Moon'?

      Correct answer: the man
      Lily's brother
      Correct answer: Lily
      Lily's mother

      Q2.
      Match the noun to another way of referring to it.

      Correct Answer:the man,the gentleman

      the gentleman

      Correct Answer:Lily,the child

      the child

      Correct Answer:the moon,it

      it

      Q3.
      When Lily is trying to communicate with the man, we can describe her as which of these adjectives?

      bored
      Correct answer: determined
      restless
      Correct answer: persisitent

      Q4.
      Choose an appropriate adjective to describe the man when Lily sees him for the first time.

      excited
      grateful
      Correct answer: lonely
      frustrated

      Q5.
      Choose the adjectives which create a negative picture of the moon.

      shining
      Correct answer: empty
      Correct answer: barren
      comfortable
      Correct answer: freezing

      Q6.
      When the man sees Lily through the telescope, he feels which of these adjectives?

      sad
      Correct answer: grateful
      frustrated
      Correct answer: comforted

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