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      Planning an essay on generational conflict in Pinnock's ‘Leave Taking’

      Lesson details

      Learning outcome

      I can develop an essay plan using ideas around stagecraft and setting.

      Key learning points

      1. A thesis statement is an overarching argument that presents your main idea for the essay.
      2. A topic sentence introduces the main idea of a paragraph and links it to the thesis.
      3. You should use stagecraft and setting as evidence to support your argument.
      4. Concluding sentences can focus on a writer’s intention and draw your paragraph to a close.

      Keywords

      • Integration - the process of adapting to and becoming part of a new society

      • Commentary - an expression of opinions or offering of explanations about an event or situation

      Common misconception

      Pupils might mistakenly believe that generational conflict only refers to disagreements between parents and children, overlooking the broader societal influences that shape the conflict.

      Generational conflict in 'Leave Taking' isn't just about family disagreements; it is also influenced by the different social, cultural, and historical experiences that shape each generation’s view of identity and belonging.

      Teacher tip

      Have pupils create a Venn diagram comparing how Enid and her daughters view their cultural identities and the sources of their generational conflict. This quick visual activity helps clarify the differences and overlaps in their perspectives without taking much time.

      Equipment

      You will need access to a copy of Winsome Pinnock's 'Leave Taking' published by Nick Hern Books.

      Content guidance

      Depiction or discussion of discriminatory behaviour

      Supervision

      Adult supervision recommended

      Licence

      This content is © Oak National Academy Limited (2025), licensed on Open Government Licence version 3.0
      except where otherwise stated. See Oak's terms & conditions
      (Collection 2).

      Lesson video

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      Prior knowledge starter quiz

      6 Questions

      Q1.
      When writing an essay on 'Leave Taking', it's important to know some key terms that will help structure your planning and response. Match the key terms to their definitions.

      Correct Answer:thesis,overarching argument to an essay, supported by the whole text

      overarching argument to an essay, supported by the whole text

      Correct Answer:topic sentence,the first sentence of a paragraph stating its main idea

      the first sentence of a paragraph stating its main idea

      Correct Answer:main quotations,quotations which support your topic sentence and need analysis

      quotations which support your topic sentence and need analysis

      Correct Answer:supporting quotations,quotations which support your topic sentence but don't need analysis

      quotations which support your topic sentence but don't need analysis

      Correct Answer:concluding sentence,the final sentence of a paragraph, focusing on writer's intentions

      the final sentence of a paragraph, focusing on writer's intentions

      Correct Answer:conclusion,drawing together your main ideas and thesis

      drawing together your main ideas and thesis

      Q2.
      Which of the following are reasonable synonyms for the word 'reaffirm'?

      Correct answer: confirm
      disregard
      renounce
      Correct answer: assert

      Q3.
      Which of the following are reasonable synonyms for the word 'reconcile'?

      Correct answer: harmonise
      dispute
      Correct answer: settle
      separate

      Q4.
      Which of the following are true of a main quotation?

      Correct answer: it requires in-depth analysis and is central to the argument
      it is briefly mentioned and doesn't need much explanation
      Correct answer: it helps illustrate key dramatic methods in the play
      it only appears in the introduction or conclusion

      Q5.
      Which of the following are true of a supporting quotation?

      Correct answer: it reinforces the argument without needing detailed analysis
      it is used to analyse the playwright’s methods deeply
      Correct answer: it provides additional evidence to back up a main point
      Correct answer: it can be embedded within sentences to support ideas briefly

      Q6.
      Which of the following are true of a concluding sentence?

      Correct answer: it summarises the main idea of the paragraph
      it introduces new ideas or evidence to support the argument
      Correct answer: it signals the end of a paragraph and reflects on the writer’s intentions

      6 Questions

      Q1.
      What does generational conflict primarily refer to in Leave Taking?

      Physical fights between parents and children
      Correct answer: Tension from cultural and identity differences across generations
      Miscommunication due to language barriers
      Financial struggles within the family

      Q2.
      Arguably, in 'Leave Taking', Viv’s decision to study Black Studies shows...

      Correct answer: she wants to understand her Jamaican roots more deeply.
      she rejects her British identity.
      she is confused about her cultural identity.
      she wants to escape her mother's expectations.

      Q3.
      Which quotation taken from Pinnock's 'Leave Taking' best demonstrates Del’s early rejection of Jamaica and some of its cultural practices?

      “Black Studies. You ever hear of such a thing?”
      Correct answer: “Mumbo jumbo nonsense.”
      “What if I don’t want to go to university?”
      “Me and those teachers don’t speak the same lingo.”

      Q4.
      What is the purpose of a thesis statement in an essay?

      to summarise the entire play
      to introduce each paragraph’s argument
      Correct answer: to present the essay’s central argument
      to include a key quotation from the text

      Q5.
      What is the purpose of a main quotation in an essay?

      to provide a general overview of the theme
      Correct answer: to analyse key moments in the text in detail
      to briefly reinforce the argument without deep analysis
      to summarise the overall message of the play

      Q6.
      Which statement below is false about the relationship between thesis statements and topic sentences?

      A thesis introduces the essay’s argument; topic sentences develop points.
      Correct answer: A thesis statement is supported by moments in the text.
      Topic sentences help explain main ideas in individual paragraphs.
      A thesis is broader than any single topic sentence.

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