Writing the first entry of Florence Nightingale's diary
Lesson details
Learning outcome
I can write the first entry of Florence Nightingale's diary.
Key learning points
- Perspective is the way someone thinks, feels or sees something.
- Writing in a diary will mostly be in the past tense.
- A diary entry should be written in the first person.
- First person is a point of view in writing or storytelling where the narrator or speaker refers to themselves.
Keywords
Perspective - the way someone thinks, feels or sees something
Past tense - tells the reader the action happened before now
First person - a point of view in writing or storytelling where the narrator or speaker refers to themselves using 'I'
Common misconception
Pupils may struggle to maintain a consistent tense in their writing. Usually, this is moving betwen past and present tense.
Teach children that words such as 'was' and 'had' can change the tense of verbs to the past tense. Play a game where children have to change present tense verbs into past tense.
Teacher tip
Play a game of hot-seating at the start of the lesson, so children can practise getting in the role of Florence Nicghtingale and speaking from the first person perspective.
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Prior knowledge starter quiz
6 Questions
Q1.What is someone's perspective?
Q2.What is the name for a book that people write down their experiences, thoughts and feelings?
Q3.True or false? Each time a person writes in their diary, it is called a chapter.
Q4.True or false? A diary is personal and private to the writer.
Q5.Florence travelled to Crimea with a team of 38 ...
Q6.When Florence saw the hospital in Scutari, what do you think she thought?
Assessment exit quiz
6 Questions
Q1.Diaries are a type of...
Q2.A diary entry is written in which tense?
Q3.Which of these verbs are past tense?
Q4.Fill in the blank. A diary entry should be written in the __________ person.
Q5.Which of these words would you likely use when writing in the first person?
Q6.Which of these is written in the first person perspective?
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