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      Planning and writing section two of an essay about early Islamic civilisation

      Lesson details

      Learning outcome

      I can use my research to plan and write the second section of an essay about early Islamic civilisation.

      Key learning points

      1. Writing is most successful when structure, content and vocabulary is planned.
      2. Information in this section should be specific and detailed.
      3. Cohesion, making use of research and a formal tone are appropriate in an essay.
      4. An essay can use a bank of research, evidence, statistics and quotes to inform the reader.

      Keywords

      • Cohesive devices - linguistic structures that can enhance text flow

      • Adverbial complex sentence - a sentence that includes a main clause and an adverbial subordinate clause

      • Non-finite complex sentence - a sentence that includes a main clause and a non-finite subordinate clause

      • Parenthesis - extra information that can be added or removed from a sentence and it still makes sense

      • Brackets - punctuation marks that can be used to add additional information to a sentence

      Common misconception

      Pupils may write the full section as one paragraph.

      Parts of the plan are explicitly allocated into paragraphs one and two. This is also modelled in the second learning cycle.

      Teacher tip

      Allow pupils time to discuss and revisit key knowledge necessary for this section.

      Licence

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      Lesson video

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      Prior knowledge starter quiz

      6 Questions

      Q1.
      Order the parts of an essay.

      1 - introduction
      2 - sections
      3 - conclusion

      Q2.
      Match the parts of an essay with their functions.

      Correct Answer:introduction,gives the reader general information about the essay subject

      gives the reader general information about the essay subject

      Correct Answer:sections,paragraphs of specific information about an aspect of the subject

      paragraphs of specific information about an aspect of the subject

      Correct Answer:conclusion,summarises the key information of the essay

      summarises the key information of the essay

      Q3.
      Which of these fronted adverbials are appropriate to use in an essay?

      Suddenly,
      Correct answer: However,
      Correct answer: In addition to this,
      As quick as a flash,
      Correct answer: In 766 CE,

      Q4.
      Select facts that are appropriate to use in section two.

      The Prophet Muhammad was born in 570 CE.
      Correct answer: Baghdad was built in 766CE.
      Correct answer: The Abbasids prioritised education, charity and good governance.
      The Umayyads took over Islamic rule after the Rashidun caliphate.

      Q5.
      Order the parts of a main section paragraph.

      1 - introductory sentence
      2 - explanatory sentences
      3 - linking sentence

      Q6.
      Match the keywords to their definitions.

      Correct Answer:Abbasid dynasty,the family who reigned over the Islamic Empire during the Golden Age

      the family who reigned over the Islamic Empire during the Golden Age

      Correct Answer:House of Wisdom,a school, library and translation centre

      a school, library and translation centre

      Correct Answer:Baghdad,the capital city constructed by the Abbasids

      the capital city constructed by the Abbasids

      6 Questions

      Q1.
      Match the keywords to their definitions.

      Correct Answer:cohesive devices,linguistic structures that can enhance text flow

      linguistic structures that can enhance text flow

      Correct Answer:adverbial complex sentence,includes a main clause and an adverbial subordinate clause

      includes a main clause and an adverbial subordinate clause

      Correct Answer:non-finite complex sentence,includes a main clause and a non-finite subordinate clause

      includes a main clause and a non-finite subordinate clause

      Correct Answer:parenthesis,extra information that can be added or removed from a sentence

      extra information that can be added or removed from a sentence

      Correct Answer:brackets,can be used to add additional information to a sentence

      can be used to add additional information to a sentence

      Q2.
      Order the parts of our essay about early Islamic civilisation.

      1 - introduction
      2 - the Abbasid dynasty of early Islamic civilisation
      3 - the Golden Age
      4 - conclusion

      Q3.
      Put the parts of a section paragraph in order.

      1 - introductory sentence
      2 - explanatory sentences
      3 - linking sentence

      Q4.
      Match each part of the paragraph to its function.

      Correct Answer:introductory sentence,introduces what this paragraph will be about

      introduces what this paragraph will be about

      Correct Answer:explanatory sentences,gives the reader specific information to explain the point in detail

      gives the reader specific information to explain the point in detail

      Correct Answer:linking sentence,links on to the next section

      links on to the next section

      Q5.
      Match the four pillars of Baghdad to their meanings.

      Correct Answer:defence,difficult to penetrate

      difficult to penetrate

      Correct Answer:community,a welcoming place

      a welcoming place

      Correct Answer:religion,symbolic of heavens and Earth

      symbolic of heavens and Earth

      Correct Answer:government,central to city

      central to city

      Q6.
      Select the cohesive devices.

      Correct answer: fronted adverbials
      capital letters
      Correct answer: complex sentences
      personification
      Correct answer: subject-specific vocabulary

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