Editing a narrative based on 'The Man on the Moon'
Lesson details
Learning outcome
I can make purposeful edits to my narrative opening of ‘The Man on the Moon’.
Key learning points
- Editing is the process of making changes to improve our writing.
- When editing punctuation, missing or incorrectly used capital letters, full stops and commas are all checked.
- When editing sentence structure, the way sentences are constructed is checked to improve and enhance text flow.
- When editing language, choices of words and phrases are carefully reviewed.
Keywords
Editing - the process of improving writing to improve text flow and overall quality
Punctuation - a set of standardised symbols and marks used in written language to structure sentences
Sentence structure - the way words are arranged within a sentence to convey meaning
Vocabulary - the use of specific words and phrases to convey a meaning
Common misconception
Pupils may think that editing means correcting spelling and handwriting.
Editing involves improving language choices, sentence structure and enhancing the overall quality and effectiveness of the writing.
Teacher tip
Provide pupils with word banks so that they can upgrade and improve their language choices. Allow them opportunities to practise editing on mini-whiteboards. Pupils could also use this lesson to edit the rest of their narrative.
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Prior knowledge starter quiz
6 Questions
Q1.Which sentence is correctly punctuated?
Q2.'The excited, determined girl' is an example of which of these?
Q3.Match the word class to its example.
glimpsed
slowly
barren
staircase
Q4.Which sentence is correctly punctuated?
Q5.A sentence is formed of two main clauses joined with a co-ordinating conjunction.
Q6.What must a clause contain?
Assessment exit quiz
6 Questions
Q1.What is editing?
Q2.Match the word to its definition.
the way words are arranged and organised within sentences
language choices made by a writer
a set of symbols and marks used to structure sentences
Q3.Which sentence is accurately punctuated with capital letters?
Q4.Which conjunction should join these two clauses together? 'Lily was determined to send her letter to the moon, __________ nothing was working.'
Q5.What should we do when editing sentence structure?
Q6.What should we do when making improvements to language choices?
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