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      Writing the resolution of a narrative based on 'The Man on the Moon'

      Lesson details

      Learning outcome

      I can write a narrative resolution based on 'The Man on the Moon’.

      Key learning points

      1. The purpose of a resolution is to resolve the story and give the reader a chance to reflect.
      2. Saying sentences aloud before they are written helps to check for sense.
      3. Using the full range of sentence types (simple, compound and complex) improves text flow for the reader.
      4. Fronted adverbials of time, place and manner describe the action in the main clause in further detail.
      5. The narrative is written in the past tense.

      Keywords

      • Text flow - how a text is written to keep the reader engaged

      • Fronted adverbial - a sentence starter followed by a comma

      • Past tense - shows that the action happened before now

      Common misconception

      Pupils might write about moments that take place in the opening, build-up or climax.

      The resolution follows a clear, chronological order that includes the three key moments from pupils' plans.

      Teacher tip

      Pupils should be given lots of opportunities to say sentences aloud or to write sentences on whiteboards, using the notes from their plans ahead of writing.

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      Prior knowledge starter quiz

      6 Questions

      Q1.
      Put the key moments of the resolution in the correct order.

      1 - The man looks down at Earth through his telescope.
      2 - Lily and the man wave at each other.
      3 - A tear rolls down his face as he realises someone is thinking of him.

      Q2.
      Which sentence is correctly punctuated?

      the man lifted the precious telescope
      the man lifted the precious telescope.
      The man lifted the precious telescope
      Correct answer: The man lifted the precious telescope.

      Q3.
      Which of these nouns must start with a capital letter?

      Correct answer: earth
      house
      Correct answer: lily
      moon

      Q4.
      Match the word class to its definition.

      Correct Answer:noun,a person, place or thing
      Correct Answer:adverb,a word that describes a verb
      Correct Answer:adjective,a word that describes a noun
      Correct Answer:verb,a doing or a being word

      Q5.
      Before writing sentences down, it is helpful to them aloud first.

      Correct Answer: say, Say, speak

      Q6.
      We can use our to help us structure our writing.

      Correct Answer: plan, plans, Plan, Plans

      6 Questions

      Q1.
      The purpose of the resolution is to do which of these?

      Correct answer: resolve the story
      introduce the characters and setting
      Correct answer: give the reader a chance to reflect
      build up excitement and tension

      Q2.
      When we write, we should do which of these?

      include only one type of sentence
      do not check back for spelling and punctuation errors
      Correct answer: say our sentences aloud first
      Correct answer: showcase the sentence types we know
      Correct answer: use our plans to help us structure our writing

      Q3.
      Match the show and tell language to the emotion it is describing.

      Correct Answer:A smile spread on her face.,happy
      Correct Answer:A tear rolled down his face.,moved
      Correct Answer:Their heart skipped a beat.,excited

      Q4.
      Match the sentence types to their examples.

      Correct Answer:simple sentence,He had a friend.
      Correct Answer:compound sentence,He waved at Earth and a tear rolled down his face.
      Correct Answer:complex sentence,As he waved happily at Earth, a tear rolled down his face.

      Q5.
      Complete the following complex sentence with an appropriate subordinate clause: 'Lily waved ecstatically__________.'

      because she was desperate to get home.
      Correct answer: as she saw the man gazing at her through the telescope.
      if she could find a way to send the letter to the moon.
      and she smiled happily.

      Q6.
      Complete the following simple sentence with an appropriate fronted adverbial: '__________ he had found a friend.'

      Slowly,
      Silently,
      Correct answer: Finally,
      In addition,

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