Comparing texts about World War One using comparative topic sentences
Lesson details
Learning outcome
I can write comparative topic sentences about two texts which focus on the same event - World War One.
Key learning points
- Comparing one text to another can often help you evaluate it more clearly.
- You can compare what each writer chose to write about, and how they chose to write about it.
- The opening line of comparative paragraphs could start with a topic sentence which states the paragraph's main idea.
- The next sentences of a comparative paragraph could focus on the differences between the two texts you wish to compare.
Keywords
Evaluate - to consider something carefully and make a judgement about it
Form - in literature, the type of text a writer uses; short story, memoir, poem are all examples
First person - the narrator is a person in the story, using pronouns like 'I', 'we', 'me'
Third person - the narrator is not a person in the story, using pronouns like 'she', 'he', 'they'
Method - the tools a writer uses to create their work; structure, form and language are perhaps the most significant examples.
Common misconception
You can't compare different text types to each other. For example, a short story to a memoir.
By comparing different forms, we can often come to understand why a writer chose a particular text type more deeply - what this particular text type allowed them to do or convey to the reader.
Teacher tip
Consider if you wish to use a different text or texts as the model comparison. If so, adapt the model.
Equipment
Pupils who wish to compare Ian Beck's 'Propping Up The Line' to another text need a copy of the 2014 edition of 'Stories of WW1' edited by Tony Bradman. Other texts are found in additional materials.
Content guidance
Depiction or discussion of sensitive content
Depiction or discussion of violence or suffering
Supervision
Adult supervision recommended
Licence
Lesson video
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Prior knowledge starter quiz
6 Questions
Q1.When analysing a piece of war literature, we might consider the writer's choice of form, language and structure. Match these key terms to their definitions.
the type of text a writer uses
the words a writer has chosen
how a text is put together e.g. its beginning, middle and end
Q2.In the unit 'Literary perspectives from the First World War', we read a number of different text types. Match each text type to its definition.
designed to be read in one sitting, written in prose
designed to be read in one sitting, written in stanzas
an account based on someone's memories
a written message (often) from one person to another
selected moment from a text
Q3.In 'Literary perspectives from the First World War', we have come across a number of different writers. Match each writer to a text they have written.
'Mental Cases'
'The Fly'
'Testament of Youth'
'Propping Up The Line'
Q4.In 'Literary perspectives from the First World War', we have come across a number of different writers. Match each writer to something we know about them.
best remembered for poetry about realities of trench warfare
the master of the short story, experimental in plot and characters
lost a fiancé, two close friends and her brother in WW1
inspired by the experiences of their grandfather
Q5.Which word best completes this sentence comparing 2 texts: " Owen and Beck present the brutal reality of trench warfare."
Q6.Which word best completes this sentence comparing 2 texts: " Owen experienced the trenches first hand, Beck was inspired by his grandfather’s time in France."
Assessment exit quiz
6 Questions
Q1.When writing an analytical paragraph which compares two texts, you should start with a which states the paragraph's main idea.
Q2.Starting with the first, put these sentence ideas in the order for a paragraph which compares two texts.
Q3.Which word best completes this sentence comparing 2 texts: " Beck and Mansfield create fictitious short stories to explore the long term impacts of war."
Q4.Which word best completes this sentence comparing 2 texts: " Beck presents trauma of a soldier, Mansfield considers the trauma of a father who has lost a son."
Q5.Starting with the first, put these sentences in order for a paragraph which starts by comparing two texts.
Q6.Starting with the first, put these sentences in order for a paragraph which starts by comparing two texts.
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