Writing a letter as a soldier in the trenches of World War One
Lesson details
Learning outcome
I can write a letter which recounts an imagined experience from the trenches of World War One, using Wilfred Owen’s 1917 letter to his mother as stimulus.
Key learning points
- The date, address and greeting are important features of letters.
- A recount could balance precise facts with atmospheric details.
- A letter concludes with a sign off which could signal your relationship with the person the letter is to.
Keywords
Recount - to describe something that happened, to tell its story
Balance - an equal distribution of two or more things
Metaphor - a literary technique in which you compare one thing to another; Owen compares mud to an octopus in his letter
Atmospheric - creating a distinctive mood
Resentment - a complex emotion in which you feel anger, disappointment, bitterness
Common misconception
People don't use literary methods in nonfiction writing.
Whenever you write any thing - even a shopping list - you are employing methods. Every word is a choice, thus every choice can be evaluated. In nonfiction writing (even nonfiction writing by people who aren't writers) methods will be used for effect.
Teacher tip
The longest learning cycle will be learning cycle 2 because this is where pupils write the account. Consider how long this learning cycle needs, and then work out precise timings for the rest of the lesson.
Content guidance
Depiction or discussion of violence or suffering
Depiction or discussion of violence or suffering
Depiction or discussion of mental health issues
Supervision
Adult supervision required
Licence
Lesson video
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Prior knowledge starter quiz
6 Questions
Q1.Personal letters were a vital form of communication during World War One. What are some common features of letters?
Q2.Starting with the first, order these events from one of Wilfred Owen's 1917 letters to his mother during WW1 in chronological order.
Q3.Wilfred Owen's 1917 letter to his mother during WW1 includes a number of metaphors. Which of the below are metaphors?
Q4.Wilfred Owen's 1917 letter to his mother during WW1 includes a number of methods which help convey the horror of his experience. Match each quotation to its method.
It was of course dark, too dark [.]
The seeng-seeng-seeng of the bullets reminded me of Mary's canary.
Water filled it to a depth of 1 or 2 feet, leaving say 4 feet of air.
Every ten minutes on Sunday afternoon seemed an hour.
[I had to] crawl, wade, climb and flounder over No Man's Land [.]
Q5.In one of his 1917 letters to his mother during WW1, Owen writes of a particular episode in the trenches, "Those fifty hours were the of my happy life."
Q6.In one of his 1917 letters to his mother during WW1, Owen describes the sludge of the trenches as "an of sucking mud".
Assessment exit quiz
6 Questions
Q1.The majority of personal letters begin with a which indicates who the letter is for.
Q2.Sign offs like "Yours sincerely" and "Yours faithfully" are used for more letters. Sign offs like "Love from" are used for more informal or personal letters.
Q3.We have looked at an example of a letter Wilfred Owen wrote to his mother during WW1. Why were letters such an important feature of life during WW1?
Q4.In Wilfred Owen's 1917 letters to his mother, how does Owen sign this letter off?
Q5.In one of his 1917 letters to his mother during WW1, Owen uses a to describe the sludge of the trenches as "an octopus of sucking mud".
Q6.In one of his 1917 letters to his mother during WW1, Owen describes how he moved 150 yards across No Man's Land, saying he had to "crawl, , climb and flounder."
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