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      Planning a description of a dystopian setting

      Lesson details

      Learning outcome

      I can plan an effective description of a dystopian setting.

      Key learning points

      1. Descriptions should include minimal action.
      2. An effective way to include character is with one small character action, for example, looking through a window.
      3. It is important to decide your tone before you start writing, so that it remains consistent.
      4. When planning a single paragraph, you should choose three-four details to focus on.
      5. It is important to plan interesting vocabulary that matches your tone before you start writing.

      Keywords

      • Permeate - If something permeates the air, it spreads through it.

      • Vivid - If something is vivid, it allows you to visualise it clearly.

      • Erode - If something erodes, it is gradually destroyed or worn away at.

      • Remnants - The remnants of something are the small parts left when the majority of it has been destroyed.

      Common misconception

      Action is a key part of a description.

      Explain to pupils that the purpose of a description is to focus on certain aspects of a scene in order to set the tone and genre.

      Teacher tip

      You may want to show students several openings to stories you have read together to demonstrate how a writer of any genre might 'set the scene'.

      Content guidance

      Depiction or discussion of sensitive content

      Supervision

      Adult supervision recommended

      Licence

      This content is © Oak National Academy Limited (2025), licensed on Open Government Licence version 3.0
      except where otherwise stated. See Oak's terms & conditions
      (Collection 2).

      Lesson video

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      Prior knowledge starter quiz

      6 Questions

      Q1.
      What would you not expect to see in a dystopian description?

      Correct answer: thriving nature and wildlife
      dilapidated buildings
      suffering citizens
      toxic air / pollutants

      Q2.
      What is a semantic field?

      a technique comparing two words using like or as
      a technique that says something is something that it is not literally
      Correct answer: a group of words related in meaning

      Q3.
      Which words fit the semantic field of decay?

      torn, cut, crease, paper
      Correct answer: ruin, stench, crumble
      scowl, torment, unleash

      Q4.
      Which tone would you not expect to see in a dystopia?

      oppressive
      Correct answer: enthusiastic
      pessimistic

      Q5.
      What do you need to link together to create a semantic field?

      punctuation
      sentence type
      Correct answer: vocabulary

      Q6.
      By linking lots of your vocabulary to pain, which tone are you creating?

      calm
      optimistic
      Correct answer: bleak

      6 Questions

      Q1.
      What does erode mean?

      to spread through the air
      to visualise something clearly
      the small parts of something left when the majority has been destroyed
      Correct answer: to gradually be destroyed or worn away

      Q2.
      There should be minimal __________ in a description

      weather description
      object description
      Correct answer: action
      sensory language

      Q3.
      What should you plan first in a single paragraph outline?

      vocabulary
      Correct answer: tone
      closing sentence

      Q4.
      In the supporting detail section of your plan, you should make sure to plan __________ that matches your tone

      punctuation
      Correct answer: vocabulary
      sentence types

      Q5.
      Why is it important to plan the tone of your writing first?

      Correct answer: to establish a clear genre and set the scene effectively
      it is the easiest thing to think of
      your writing won't make sense without planning the tone first

      Q6.
      Order the planning process of a single paragraph outline from start to finish.

      1 - Decide upon the tone of your writing and opening sentence
      2 - Plan three to four supporting ideas and vocabulary that matches the tone
      3 - Think of an appropriate order for your supporting ideas
      4 - Plan the closing sentence

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