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      Pat Barker's 'The Silence of the Girls': understanding the extract

      Lesson details

      Learning outcome

      I can show understanding of Pat Barker's ‘The Silence of the Girls’ through comprehension and annotation.

      Key learning points

      1. Briseis is a character from Greek mythology; she is given to Achilles (a renowned warrior) as a prize of war.
      2. Pat Barker wrote ‘The Silence of the Girls’ from the first person perspective of Briseis.
      3. The novel begins with Briseis in her home city of Lyrnessus which is under attack from the Greeks.
      4. Barker creates tension and suspense through descriptions of Achilles, the battle and hints about Briseis's future.
      5. When annotating a text, you can use a range of symbols and notes to help develop an understanding of the text’s ideas.

      Keywords

      • First person - the narrator of the story is a character in the story, using pronouns like ‘I’ and ‘me’.

      • Perspective - point of view.

      • Tension - what readers feel when they start to anticipate something bad is going to happen.

      • Suspense - the state the reader is held in as they wait for an anticipated conflict, event or outcome to occur.

      • Annotate - to make short notes on, and about, a text.

      Common misconception

      When annotating, you should highlight, underline and circle interesting things. You don't need to write anything down as you will remember what you thought.

      Symbols, highlights and underlinings are all useful, but only if accompanied by short written notes which remind you what it was you found interesting. Otherwise your symbols become meaningless.

      Teacher tip

      Consider how you want to read the extract with your class. What additional questions do you want to ask? What words will require further definition? How will you support pupil annotations?

      Equipment

      You will need a copy of 'The Silence of the Girls' by Pat Barker published by Hamish Hamilton in 2018.

      Content guidance

      Depiction or discussion of discriminatory behaviour

      Depiction or discussion of upsetting content

      Depiction or discussion of violence or suffering

      Depiction or discussion of violence or suffering

      Depiction or discussion of sexual violence

      Supervision

      Adult supervision required

      Licence

      This content is © Oak National Academy Limited (2026), licensed on Open Government Licence version 3.0
      except where otherwise stated. See Oak's terms & conditions
      (Collection 2).

      Lesson video

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      Prior knowledge starter quiz

      6 Questions

      Q1.
      Match each term to its example sentence (‘Myths, legends and stories that inspire’).

      Correct Answer:first person ,As I heard his battle cry, I shivered.
      Correct Answer:second person ,You must have heard of Achilles.
      Correct Answer:third person ,Achilles was known as a brutal warrior. She feared him hugely.

      Q2.
      What is true of Achilles, a character from Greek mythology? (‘Myths, legends and stories that inspire’)

      He is a disappointment to his father.
      Correct answer: He is a warrior.
      He marries a sea nymph.
      Correct answer: His best friend is called Patroclus.
      He is strong but slow.

      Q3.
      Match each word to its definition (‘Myths, legends and stories that inspire’).

      Correct Answer:first person ,narrator is a character in the story, using pronouns like "I" and "me"
      Correct Answer:perspective,point of view
      Correct Answer:tension,what we feel when we anticipate something bad is going to happen
      Correct Answer:suspense,the state we are held in as we wait for something bad to occur
      Correct Answer:annotate,to make short notes on, and about, a text

      Q4.
      What does it mean to be renowned? ('Myths, legends and stories that inspire’)

      to be loved
      to be hated
      Correct answer: to be famous
      to be unknown
      to be a powerful warrior

      Q5.
      Complete the sentence: A is a method of comparison by which a writer compares two things using ‘like’ or ‘as’. (‘Myths, legends and stories that inspire’)

      Correct Answer: simile

      Q6.
      Which of the examples below are similes? (‘Myths, legends and stories that inspire’)

      He was a pig of a man.
      Correct answer: He cut men down like a butcher.
      He was renowned as a famous warrior.

      6 Questions

      Q1.
      Whose perspective is Pat Barker's ‘The Silence of the Girls’ told from? (‘Myths, legends and stories that inspire’)

      Achilles
      Mynes
      Ismene
      Correct answer: Briseis
      Lyrnessus

      Q2.
      When annotating Pat Barker’s ‘The Silence of the Girls’ (‘Myths, legends and stories that inspire’), what are some of the things you might do?

      highlight the whole of the first and last paragraphs
      Correct answer: write short notes at the side of the text
      Correct answer: underline important words and phrases
      write one or two analytical paragraphs at the bottom
      underline any dialogue

      Q3.
      Which words does Pat Barker use to describe Achilles in ‘The Silence of the Girls’ (‘Myths, legends and stories that inspire’).

      renowned
      bull
      Correct answer: butcher
      Correct answer: wolf
      Correct answer: inhuman

      Q4.
      Which of these are examples of the way Pat Barker creates tension and suspense in ‘The Silence of the Girls’? (‘Myths, legends and stories that inspire’)

      by listing all of the ways people praise Achilles
      Correct answer: by describing the sounds of the battlefield
      Correct answer: by making it clear that Briseis is vulnerable
      by developing the character of Ismene
      by adding a new character to the myth: that of Briseis

      Q5.
      Match each character, all from Pat Barker’s ‘The Silence of the Girls’ (‘Myths, legends and stories that inspire’), to what we know about them.

      Correct Answer:Briseis,the narrator; royalty in Lyrnessus
      Correct Answer:Ismene,enslaved by Mynes
      Correct Answer:Achilles,a renowned warrior; claims Briseis after raiding Lyrnessus
      Correct Answer:Mynes,married to Briseis
      Correct Answer:Agamemnon,a king; Achilles has to give him Briseis

      Q6.
      Starting with the first, put these plot points from Pat Barker's ‘The Silence of the Girls’ (‘Myths, legends and stories that inspire’) in chronological order.

      1 - Briseis explains what she knows of Achilles.
      2 - Briseis describes journeying to the tower in Lyrnessus to be kept safe.
      3 - Briseis and others arrive in the tower where they are to be kept safe.
      4 - Briseis describes the atmosphere in the tower where women and children are held.
      5 - We learn of the brutal punishments awaiting the women and children of Lyrnessus.
      6 - Briseis realises Ismene, who is enslaved, isn’t sympathetic about her future.
      7 - Briseis realises she is about to be enslaved.

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