Choose exam board for KS4 Computer Science (GCSE)
Choose exam board for KS4 English
Choose exam board for KS4 French
Choose exam board for KS4 Geography
Choose exam board for KS4 German
Choose exam board for KS4 History
Choose tier for KS4 Maths
Choose exam board for KS4 Music
Choose exam board for KS4 Physical education (GCSE)
Choose exam board for KS4 Religious education (GCSE)
Choose exam board for KS4 Spanish

      Turning points in 'Escape from Pompeii'

      Lesson details

      Learning outcome

      I can explore how a turning point in a narrative affects a character’s emotions.

      Key learning points

      1. ‘Escape from Pompeii’ builds tension as the story progresses, drawing readers into the narrative of the eruption.
      2. Tension can be built up in many ways thorough hinting, pacing, illustration, character reactions and cliffhangers.
      3. A turning point in a narrative is a pivotal moment that significantly alters the course of the story.
      4. Turning points can evoke a range of emotions in the character.

      Keywords

      • Tension - Tension is a feeling of nervousness, excitement or fear.

      • Hint - A hint is a slight indication or suggestion of something (e.g. something that might happen next).

      • Atmosphere - Atmosphere is the mood created in a section or whole of a text

      • Turning point - A turning point in a narrative is a pivotal moment that significantly alters the course of the story or a character's journey.

      • Emotions graph - An emotions graph is a reading task where readers plot a character's feelings and emotions as they change throughout a narrative.

      Common misconception

      During Task A, pupils may not find an example of each of the tension-building techniques.

      Different techniques may be used on each page. You could share examples for the three double-page spreads after the task.

      Teacher tip

      You may wish to explain why constantly building tension is not effective for a narrative. The structure of a story needs to vary in emotion and engage a reader in different ways. You might want to map the text out onto a story mountain - or similar template.

      Equipment

      You need a copy of the 2005 Frances Lincoln Children's Books edition of ‘Escape from Pompeii’ written and illustrated by Christina Balit, for this lesson.

      Content guidance

      Depiction or discussion of upsetting content

      Supervision

      Adult supervision recommended

      Licence

      This content is © Oak National Academy Limited (2025), licensed on Open Government Licence version 3.0
      except where otherwise stated. See Oak's terms & conditions
      (Collection 2).

      Lesson video

      Loading...

      Prior knowledge starter quiz

      6 Questions

      Q1.
      Who is the publisher of 'Escape from Pompeii'?

      Christina Balit
      Correct answer: Frances Lincoln Children's Books
      Mavis Nwokobia

      Q2.
      How is Mount Vesuvius described in the text?

      Correct answer: gentle
      a shield
      Correct answer: a protector
      annoyed

      Q3.
      True or False? All of the citizens of Pompeii paid attention to the early tremors of the eruption.

      Correct Answer: False, false

      Q4.
      Which month did the eruption of Mount Vesuvius in AD 79 occur?

      June
      July
      Correct answer: August
      September

      Q5.
      What mood is created by the following sentence: The children laughed and played in the sunny meadow, their smiles brightening the day.

      Correct answer: joyful
      gloomy
      eerie

      Q6.
      What mood is created by the following sentence: The dark clouds gathered ominously overhead as the hikers quickened their pace, sensing the impending storm.

      Correct answer: tense
      hopeful
      peaceful

      6 Questions

      Q1.
      Match the following keywords to their definitions.

      Correct Answer:tension,a feeling of nervousness, excitement or fear

      a feeling of nervousness, excitement or fear

      Correct Answer:hint,a slight indication or suggestion of something

      a slight indication or suggestion of something

      Correct Answer:turning point,a pivotal moment that significantly alters the course of the story

      a pivotal moment that significantly alters the course of the story

      Q2.
      How else can the mood created in a section or whole of a text, be described?

      empathy
      Correct answer: atmosphere
      moral

      Q3.
      True or False? There is only one turning point in a text.

      Correct Answer: False, false

      Q4.
      Short sentences in a text can affect the pacing in which way?

      It takes the reader longer to read.
      It can add more detail and description.
      Correct answer: It can create a sense of urgency.

      Q5.
      Which emotions does Tranio exhibit at the start of the text?

      Correct answer: joyful
      fear
      Correct answer: curious
      guilt

      Q6.
      Which emotions does Livia exhibit at the end of the text?

      excited
      Correct answer: sadness
      Correct answer: grief
      pride

      To help you plan your 4 English lesson on: Turning points in 'Escape from Pompeii', download all teaching resources for free and adapt to suit your pupils' needs...