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      Writing part one of the main body of a persuasive letter, inspired by a text

      Lesson details

      Learning outcome

      I can use a plan to write the first part of the main body of a persuasive letter, inspired by a text.

      Key learning points

      1. The purpose of the main body is to clearly state the writer’s most persuasive points.
      2. Using a plan and success criteria can help inform the writing process.
      3. Presumption and veiled threat are appropriate persuasive techniques to use in the main body.
      4. Points backed up by evidence, statistics, quotes or anecdotes are effective in making the writer sound credible.

      Keywords

      • Credibility - the fact that someone can be believed or trusted

      • Evidence - facts or statistics used to back up a point

      • Veiled threat - when the writer subtly threatens the reader

      • Presumption - when the writer guesses or assumes the reader’s opinion based on their character or position

      Common misconception

      Pupils may use veiled threat as a persuasive technique, but they may use it clumsily or inappropriately.

      The scaffolding and modelling of what appropriate veiled threat looks and sounds like is explicit in the lesson.

      Teacher tip

      Encourage pupils to say each sentence aloud before they write it to ensure that all their sentences make sense.

      Licence

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      Prior knowledge starter quiz

      6 Questions

      Q1.
      __________ health is when we focus on the the healthy functioning of the body's organs, blood, oxygen levels and parts we can see.

      Correct answer: Physical
      Mental
      Overall

      Q2.
      __________ health is when we focus on the healthy functioning of the mind and its impact on the rest of the body.

      Physical
      Correct answer: Mental
      Overall

      Q3.
      Select the correct spelling of the word below.

      phisical
      phisycal
      Correct answer: physical
      physicle
      fisical

      Q4.
      Put the sections of our persuasive letter in the correct order.

      1 - introduction
      2 - main body: physical health
      3 - main body: mental health
      4 - closing

      Q5.
      True or false? Information in the main body should be specific.

      Correct Answer: true, True

      Q6.
      Match these key parts of a main body paragraph to their functions.

      Correct Answer:introductory sentence,states the main argument of the paragraph

      states the main argument of the paragraph

      Correct Answer:specific information,adds further explanation and evidence to support the point

      adds further explanation and evidence to support the point

      Correct Answer:linking sentence,links to the next paragraph

      links to the next paragraph

      6 Questions

      Q1.
      __________ involves using facts or statistics to back up a point.

      Credibility
      A veiled threat
      Correct answer: Evidence
      Presumption

      Q2.
      __________ is when the writer subtly threatens the reader.

      Credibility
      Correct answer: A veiled threat
      Evidence
      Presumption

      Q3.
      __________ is when the writer guesses or assumes the reader’s opinion based on their character or position.

      Credibility
      A veiled threat
      Evidence
      Correct answer: Presumption

      Q4.
      Why is it important that our writing is credible?

      so that our arguments are not believed by the reader
      so that we can use the internet to conduct extra research
      Correct answer: so that our writing is more trustworthy and believable
      Correct answer: so that our writing is more persuasive

      Q5.
      Select the features of formal writing.

      contracted words
      Correct answer: the use of subject-specific vocabulary
      the recording of personal feelings and emotions
      Correct answer: the use of facts and statistics

      Q6.
      Select the two synonyms for 'voters'.

      people
      boys
      girls
      Correct answer: constituents
      Correct answer: electorate

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