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      Writing the opening of a diary entry based on 'How To Train Your Dragon'

      Lesson details

      Learning outcome

      I can use a plan to write the opening of a diary entry based on ‘How To Train Your Dragon’.

      Key learning points

      1. The opening of a diary can include a general recount of the day’s events.
      2. The opening includes references to the character’s thoughts and feelings.
      3. Informal tone can be achieved through use of contractions, vocabulary choice and exclamations.
      4. Plans and success criteria should be referred to during the writing process.

      Keywords

      • Summarise - to sum up the information surrounding particular events, thoughts or feelings

      • General - the most basic, necessary information

      Common misconception

      Pupils may include facts and details that are too specific for the opening paragraph.

      Learning cycle 1 and the success criteria explicitly reinforce the importance of keeping information in the opening general.

      Teacher tip

      Record pupils' ideas on working walls in the classroom so that pupils can share and magpie ideas from each other.

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      Lesson video

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      Prior knowledge starter quiz

      6 Questions

      Q1.
      Match the key terms to their definitions:

      Correct Answer:first person perspective,the point of view where the speaker or writer is the 'I/we' character

      the point of view where the speaker or writer is the 'I/we' character

      Correct Answer:chronological order,when events are recounted in the order in which they happened

      when events are recounted in the order in which they happened

      Correct Answer:informal tone,conversational tone

      conversational tone

      Q2.
      Select words appropriate to use when writing in the first person perspective:

      Correct answer: I
      they
      Correct answer: me
      he
      Correct answer: us

      Q3.
      Match the contractions to their uncontracted forms:

      Correct Answer:don't,do not

      do not

      Correct Answer:I've,I have

      I have

      Correct Answer:they're,they are

      they are

      Correct Answer:he's,he is

      he is

      Q4.
      Select key features of a diary entry:

      Correct answer: greeting (Dear Diary,)
      Correct answer: informal tone
      statistics
      subject-specific vocabulary
      Correct answer: thoughts and feelings

      Q5.
      The purpose of a diary entry is to do which of these?

      tell a story
      Correct answer: recount events
      share information with others
      Correct answer: record thoughts and feelings

      Q6.
      Select the examples of show-not-tell from the list:

      Correct answer: my hands are still shaking
      I felt humiliated
      Correct answer: my heart sinks every time I think about going back again tomorrow

      6 Questions

      Q1.
      Match the keywords to their definitions.

      Correct Answer:summarise,to sum up the key information

      to sum up the key information

      Correct Answer:general,the most basic, necessary information

      the most basic, necessary information

      Correct Answer:first person perspective,the 'I/we' perspective

      the 'I/we' perspective

      Q2.
      Information in the opening of a diary entry should be kept ...

      Correct answer: general
      specific
      vague

      Q3.
      Key elements to include in the opening of a diary entry are which of these?

      detailed recounts of parts of the day
      Correct answer: brief summary of the events
      Correct answer: sharing of over-arching thoughts and feelings
      looking ahead to the future
      Correct answer: a linking sentence which leads on to the next paragraph

      Q4.
      Order the parts of our diary entry based on 'How To Train Your Dragon'.

      1 - opening
      2 - main body part 1 - describing dragon training
      3 - main body part 2 - describing dragon training
      4 - closing

      Q5.
      Select the purpose of success criteria.

      Correct answer: act as a guide for what to include
      a list of the only writing skills that should be included
      Correct answer: can be ticked off as the writer goes along

      Q6.
      Which linguistic features can be used to help create an informal tone in a diary entry?

      subject-specific vocabulary
      Correct answer: contractions
      facts and statistics
      Correct answer: exclamations
      Correct answer: vocabulary choice

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