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      Planning the opening of 'Whale Rider'

      Lesson details

      Learning outcome

      I can plan precise and ambitious vocabulary for the opening of 'Whale Rider'.

      Key learning points

      1. The purpose of the opening is to engage the reader and introduce the setting and characters.
      2. The opening of the story introduces Paikea and her grandfather and their family context.
      3. Precise adjectives, verbs and adverbs are used to create a vivid picture for the reader.
      4. Precise and ambitious vocabulary is logged on a plan for future use.
      5. Notes should not be written in full sentences and bullet points can be used to make notes clear.

      Keywords

      • Plan - a framework that writers create before they write a section or whole text

      • Notes - written out of full sentences

      • Precise vocabulary - specific and accurate words to convey exact meanings and details in writing

      Common misconception

      Pupils may find it difficult to know what makes certain vocabulary ambitious.

      Teach pupils that there can be many options when selecting vocabulary and they need to carefully choose the most precise words for each part of their writing. This is best explained by what effect they want to create for the reader.

      Teacher tip

      The opening of the film is based on the part of the film after Paikea is born and is when she is on her grandfather's bike while he cycles both of them down the coast towards their house. Pupils may find the section before (childbirth) distressing.

      Equipment

      You must have access to the film 'Whale Rider' (South Pacific Pictures, 2002) to complete this unit. Images of the characters and scenes from the film will be helpful.

      Content guidance

      Depiction or discussion of upsetting content

      Supervision

      Adult supervision recommended

      Licence

      This content is © Oak National Academy Limited (2025), licensed on Open Government Licence version 3.0
      except where otherwise stated. See Oak's terms & conditions
      (Collection 2).

      Lesson video

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      Prior knowledge starter quiz

      6 Questions

      Q1.
      Fill in the missing word. Paikea is the main __________ in 'Whale Rider'.

      setting
      title
      Correct answer: character
      plot

      Q2.
      What is a plan?

      a final piece of written work
      Correct answer: a framework that writers create before they write
      a writer's first ideas said aloud about their writing

      Q3.
      What is the main setting in 'Whale Rider'?

      Germany
      Correct answer: a coastal village in New Zealand
      Paikea's school
      the mountains

      Q4.
      Which of these is a fronted adverbial followed by?

      full stop
      exclamation mark
      Correct answer: comma
      question mark

      Q5.
      What does a full sentence need to include?

      a comma
      Correct answer: a capital letter
      Correct answer: a verb
      Correct answer: a full stop or other closing punctuation
      a conjunction

      Q6.
      Match the word classes to their definitions.

      Correct Answer:adjective,a word that describes a noun
      Correct Answer:verb,a doing, being or having word
      Correct Answer:noun,a person, place or thing
      Correct Answer:adverb,a word that describes a verb

      6 Questions

      Q1.
      True or false? A plan should be written in full sentences.

      Correct Answer: false, False

      Q2.
      What are the purposes of the opening of a narrative?

      to build up tension
      Correct answer: to engage the reader so that they carry on reading
      to entertain the reader with the main action of the plot
      Correct answer: to introduce the setting and characters

      Q3.
      Fill in the gap: A fronted adverbial of __________ tells the reader when the action in the main idea takes place.

      manner
      cause
      Correct answer: time
      place

      Q4.
      Order the five key moments of the opening chronologically.

      1 - Paikea and her grandfather are on a bicycle.
      2 - Her grandfather is cycling whilst Paikea looks up at him.
      3 - Paikea is holding onto Koro’s Maori necklace.
      4 - They cycle along the coast towards the sea.
      5 - They reach the house and Paikea chases him.

      Q5.
      Match each word class to its example.

      Correct Answer:adjective,contented
      Correct Answer:adverb,lovingly
      Correct Answer:noun,ancestor
      Correct Answer:verb,gazed

      Q6.
      What is 'At the edge of the village,' an example of?

      fronted adverbial of time
      subordinate clause
      Correct answer: fronted adverbial of place
      main clause

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