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      Writing introductions and topic sentences for poetry comparison

      Lesson details

      Learning outcome

      I can structure an effective comparative argument with a well-crafted introduction, conclusion and topic sentences.

      Key learning points

      1. A comparative introduction should give a broad similarity in theme and nuanced differences within that similarity.
      2. A purposeful thesis should refer to the poets’ intentions or messages behind the common theme.
      3. Use comparative and correlative conjunctions to structure introductions and topic sentences.
      4. Topic sentences should lead with big ideas not the poets’ methods.

      Keywords

      • Succumb - giving way to the overwhelming power of another force

      • Condemn - express complete disapproval of

      • Futility - pointlessness or uselessness

      • Incessant - something unpleasant continuing without pause or interruption

      Common misconception

      Topic sentences should compare language techniques, form and structure.

      Topic sentences should focus on big ideas as it allows for meaningful comparison.

      Teacher tip

      The learning cycles can be adapted to fit whichever poems in the anthology you are comparing.

      Equipment

      You will need access to a copy of the AQA Power and Conflict Anthology for this lesson.

      Content guidance

      Depiction or discussion of discriminatory behaviour

      Supervision

      Adult supervision recommended

      Licence

      This content is © Oak National Academy Limited (2025), licensed on Open Government Licence version 3.0
      except where otherwise stated. See Oak's terms & conditions
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      Lesson video

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      Prior knowledge starter quiz

      6 Questions

      Q1.
      Both William Blake and Percy Bysshe Shelley...

      wrote their poems (that appear in the anthology) in the 18th century.
      Correct answer: were Romantic poets.
      were medieval poets.

      Q2.
      In 'Ozymandias', Shelley uses a __________ whereas Blake uses a __________ in 'London'.

      Correct answer: sonnet, dramatic monologue
      dramatic monologue, sonnet
      ballad, dramatic monologue

      Q3.
      Which of the below provides an accurate definition of what it means to 'compare'?

      Correct answer: estimate similarity or difference between two or more things
      say how two things are alike
      say how two things are different

      Q4.
      What is a topic sentence?

      an overarching argument about something that appears in the introduction
      a sentence that appears in your conclusion to summarise your argument
      Correct answer: a sentence that introduces an idea in each main body paragraph

      Q5.
      What is one similarity between the poems 'Ozymandias' and 'London'?

      they both suggest how humans should be in awe of nature
      Correct answer: they both show how institutions abuse their power
      they both advocate for human power

      Q6.
      What is one difference between the poems 'Ozymandias' and 'London'?

      'Ozymandias' advocates for freedom whereas 'London' does not
      'Ozymandias' shows the struggle of nature; 'London' shows the power of nature
      Correct answer: 'Ozymandias' depicts one tyrant; 'London' depicts numerous corrupt institutions

      6 Questions

      Q1.
      When comparing 'Ozymandias' and 'London', why is it important to consider that Shelley and Blake were both Romantic poets?

      they both wrote poems about love
      Correct answer: they both reject powerful institutions
      they are both fascinated with the past

      Q2.
      'Ozymandias' depicts the __________ nature of human power, whereas 'London' depicts the __________ nature of human power.

      incessant, ephemeral
      Correct answer: ephemeral, incessant
      incessant, transient

      Q3.
      What should you do at the end of a comparative introduction?

      narrow down on the similarities in both poems in relation to big ideas
      write a sentence about both poems/poets exploring overarching similarity
      Correct answer: explore nuanced differences within the poem's similarities

      Q4.
      Which sentence uses a comparative conjunction to create a valid comparison between 'Ozymandias' and 'London'?

      Correct answer: Whereas 'Ozymandias' has a mocking tone, 'London' has lamenting tone.
      'London' has a sarcastic tone, however 'Ozymandias' has a triumphant tone.
      'Ozymandias' and 'London' explore how nature prevails over human power.

      Q5.
      What can be improved about this topic sentence: 'Ozymandias' merges two sonnet forms whereas 'London' uses ABAB rhyme scheme to show the rigidity of power.'?

      it needs to use correlative conjunctions, rather than comparative
      Correct answer: it should discuss a big idea rather than literary methods
      it must use the word 'power' or 'conflict'

      Q6.
      How do both 'Ozymandias' and 'London' show man-made power succumbing to nature?

      The statue crumbles in 'Ozymandias'; the river becomes unchartered in 'London'.
      Correct answer: Sands overpower Ozymandias' statue; marriage fails due to desire in 'London'.
      Ozymandias' statue withers; people overthrow the monarchy in 'London'.

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