Using figurative language, precise verbs and perspective to write with flair
Lesson details
Learning outcome
I can identify how model answers meet the ambitious success criteria.
Key learning points
- Excellent descriptions and narratives will focus on describing details, rather than trying to write too much
- Figurative language should be used to create vivid images of what is being described
- Adding detailed description is often more valuable than plot points, in creating tension
- Using semantic fields and extended metaphors can add cohesion to creative writing
Keywords
Syntax - Syntax is the grammatical structuring of words in a specific order to make a sentence.
Realm - A realm is a kingdom or empire.
Sentinel - A sentinel is a guard who keeps watch over something.
Stoic - Somebody stoic can endure pain or hardship without showing their true emotions.
Metropolis - A metropolis is a large or significant city.
Common misconception
Students think that they need to describe everything in a setting.
Ask students to 'bounce' around a scene, only describing the most influential and important aspects of it.
Teacher tip
When analysing the model response, get students to use two colours for their annotations - one for 'figurative language' and one for 'switching focal points and transitions.' They can see how both these elements interact with one another.
Equipment
You will need a copy of the model answer used for this lesson. You will find it available in the additional materials.
Content guidance
Depiction or discussion of violence or suffering
Supervision
Adult supervision recommended
Licence
Lesson video
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Prior knowledge starter quiz
6 Questions
Q1.A narrative is an example of which kind of writing?
Q2.The difference between a narrative and a description is...
Q3.Atmosphere is the tone or of a setting.
Q4.Choose the most appropriate response. Figurative language is...
Q5.What is a semantic field?
Q6.Which of the following are examples of figurative language?
Assessment exit quiz
5 Questions
Q1.Which of the following might you do to add flair to your description?
Q2.Which of the following are examples of figurative language?
Q3.Which of the following words best describes a traditional cottage?
Q4.You are describing a freezing winter forest where the ground is solid with frost and the air bites at your skin. Which word best describes how cold it feels?
Q5.Which of these is a synoym for kingdom?
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The starter quiz will activate and check your pupils' prior knowledge, with versions available both with and without answers in PDF format.
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The assessment exit quiz will test your pupils' understanding of the key learning points.
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