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      Writing an essay on the role of fate in Shakespeare's 'Romeo and Juliet'

      Lesson details

      Learning outcome

      I can use introductions, conclusions and analytical paragraphs to write an effective response to a question on fate in Shakespeare’s ‘Romeo and Juliet’.

      Key learning points

      1. An introduction might start with a general statement about the text.
      2. This can be followed by a more specific statement about the focus of the question, and finally your thesis.
      3. A conclusion can move from a specific statement about the text to a more general statement about its relevance.
      4. An analytical paragraph should contain discourse markers, embedded quotations and an analysis of methods.

      Keywords

      • Fate - the development of events outside a person's control, regarded as predetermined by a supernatural power

      • Inevitable - certain to happen and unable to be avoided or prevented

      • Predetermined - established or decided in advance

      Common misconception

      That just identifying a method in a quotation is effective.

      To be effective, you need to analyse the effect of the method in the quotation.

      Teacher tip

      If you feel it would be more beneficial for pupils to spend more time practising introductions, conclusions and analytical paragraphs then they could write the essay for homework or during the next lesson.

      Equipment

      You may wish to have a copy of Shakespeare's 'Romeo and Juliet' for this lesson.

      Content guidance

      Depiction or discussion of sensitive content

      Depiction or discussion of mental health issues

      Supervision

      Adult supervision required

      Licence

      This content is © Oak National Academy Limited (2025), licensed on Open Government Licence version 3.0
      except where otherwise stated. See Oak's terms & conditions
      (Collection 2).

      Lesson video

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      Prior knowledge starter quiz

      6 Questions

      Q1.
      Which of the following is the definition of a thesis statement?

      Correct answer: a sentence or two that explains your overarching argument
      a sentence that explains the focus of the paragraph
      a sentence that summarises the paragraph

      Q2.
      Which of the following is the definition of a topic sentence?

      a sentence or two that explains your overarching argument
      Correct answer: a sentence that explains the focus of the paragraph
      a sentence that summarises the paragraph

      Q3.
      Match the single paragraph outline component with the definition.

      Correct Answer:topic sentence,explains specific focus of paragraph

      explains specific focus of paragraph

      Correct Answer:supporting detail,analysis of evidence that supports topic sentence

      analysis of evidence that supports topic sentence

      Correct Answer:concluding sentence,summary of paragraph with a clear focus on writer’s intentions

      summary of paragraph with a clear focus on writer’s intentions

      Q4.
      'The development of events outside a person's control, regarded as predetermined by a supernatural power' is the definition of which word beginning with 'f'?

      Correct Answer: fate

      Q5.
      A quotation that appears as part of an analytical sentence is an quotation.

      Correct Answer: embedded

      Q6.
      'Certain to happen and unable to be avoided or prevented' is the definition of which of the following?

      inauspicious
      Correct answer: inevitable
      inactive

      6 Questions

      Q1.
      Match the discourse marker with the purpose.

      Correct Answer:cause and effect,therefore

      therefore

      Correct Answer:additional information,furthermore

      furthermore

      Correct Answer:to show importance,significantly

      significantly

      Correct Answer:conclusions,overall

      overall

      Q2.
      Which sentence contain an embedded quotation?

      Correct answer: Romeo compares fate to a "yoke".
      Romeo suggests that fate is a burden.
      "...shake the yoke of inauspicious stars". Romeo uses a metaphor here.

      Q3.
      The purpose of an introduction to an analytical essay is to do which of the following?

      analyse evidence that supports the topic sentence
      explain the specific focus of the paragraph
      Correct answer: explain the overarching argument

      Q4.
      'Established or decided in advance' is the definition of which word beginning with 'p'?

      Correct Answer: predetermined, pre-determined, pre determined

      Q5.
      Starting with the first, put the elements of an introduction in order from start to finish.

      1 - general sentence about the text in relation to question
      2 - focus of question (act/scene/chapter/character/theme)
      3 - specific thesis

      Q6.
      Starting with the first, put the elements of a conclusion in order from start to finish.

      1 - specific response to your thesis
      2 - focus of writer’s overall intentions
      3 - impact of text today

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