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      Writing a character description of Paddington

      Lesson details

      Learning outcome

      I can use adjectives to describe Paddington's personality and appearance.

      Key learning points

      1. An adjective describes a noun
      2. A character can feel different emotions at different points of a story
      3. Including a range of adjectives to describe the same feeling stops repetition and makes writing more interesting
      4. Two descriptions can be joined together to form one sentence using "and"
      5. An adverb describes or adds detail to a verb

      Keywords

      • Character - a person or animal in a story

      • Description - using words to help someone imagine what something is like

      • Adjective - a word that describes a noun

      • Adverb - a word that describes a verb

      • Joining word - a word that joins words or ideas

      Common misconception

      Pupils may struggle to apply their knowledge of adverbs.

      Adapt outcomes or increase the scaffolds where necessary. Word banks should assist in generating the vocabulary, but if necessary, remove the expectation of adverb use, such as "Paddington is a kind, friendly bear." to describe his personality.

      Teacher tip

      Referring back to vocabulary from earlier in the unit and prior units helps children to produce richer descriptions. You could make use of other iterations of Paddington to develop descriptions and understanding of his personality further, such as the films, TV series or other books.

      Equipment

      You will need a copy of the 2014 Harper Collins Children's Books edition of 'Paddington' by Michael Bond, illustrated by R. W. Alley for this lesson.

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      Prior knowledge starter quiz

      6 Questions

      Q1.
      In the story 'Paddington', Paddington is the main ...

      setting.
      plot.
      Correct answer: character.

      Q2.
      Which of these can be described in a character description?

      what I did at the weekend
      facts about animals
      Correct answer: a character's personality
      Correct answer: a character's appearance

      Q3.
      What is the verb in the following sentence? 'Paddington slipped on the soap.'

      Paddington
      Correct answer: slipped
      the
      soap

      Q4.
      What are the nouns in the following sentence? 'Paddington wears a red, floppy hat.'

      Correct answer: Paddington
      wears
      red
      floppy
      Correct answer: hat

      Q5.
      What are the adjectives in the following sentence? 'Paddington wears a red, floppy hat.'

      Paddington
      wears
      Correct answer: red
      Correct answer: floppy
      hat

      Q6.
      Which of these sentences is correctly punctuated?

      My dog likes toys. and he likes food.
      My dog likes toys. And he likes food.
      My dog likes toys and He likes food.
      Correct answer: My dog likes toys and he likes food.

      6 Questions

      Q1.
      Match each term to the correct definition.

      Correct Answer:character,a person or animal in a story

      a person or animal in a story

      Correct Answer:personality,what someone is like on the inside

      what someone is like on the inside

      Correct Answer:appearance,what someone or something looks like

      what someone or something looks like

      Q2.
      Which of these expanded noun phrases might describe someone's appearance?

      Correct answer: bright, blue coat
      kind, friendly bear
      Correct answer: brown, short fur
      curious, excited bear

      Q3.
      Which of these expanded noun phrases might describe someone's personality?

      Correct answer: clumsy, messy bear
      black, wet nose
      Correct answer: chatty, excited bear
      brown, leather case

      Q4.
      Which of these words can replace 'Paddington Bear' to show you are talking about him?

      Mr Brown
      Judy
      Correct answer: Paddington
      Correct answer: he

      Q5.
      When you use the joining word 'and', what does 'and' replace?

      Correct answer: the first full stop
      the verb
      the character's name
      Correct answer: the capital letter starting the second idea

      Q6.
      Which of these sentences is punctuated correctly?

      Paddington has a black, wet nose and he wears a red, floppy hat
      Paddington has a black, wet nose. and he wears a red, floppy hat.
      Paddington has a black, wet nose and He wears a red, floppy hat
      Correct answer: Paddington has a black, wet nose and he wears a red, floppy hat.

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