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      Writing the second paragraph of a persuasive letter

      Lesson details

      Learning outcome

      I can write the second paragraph of a persuasive letter.

      Key learning points

      1. Persuasive letters have distinctive linguistic features in order to achieve their purpose.
      2. An adverbial complex sentence is a main clause and an adverbial clause that starts with a subordinating conjunction.
      3. The subordinating conjunction ‘because’ introduces a reason.
      4. Oral rehearsal of full sentences helps to ensure they are structured accurately.
      5. First person perspective is the point of view where the writer is the 'I' character.

      Keywords

      • First person - the ‘I/we’ perspective

      • Complex sentence - a sentence formed of at least one main clause and a subordinate clause

      • Text flow - how a text is written to keep the reader engaged

      • Sign-off - indicates who wrote the letter and that the letter is coming to an end

      • Persuasive techniques - language structures or devices used in writing to try to change someone’s mind or behaviour

      Common misconception

      Pupils may shift into writing from the third person perspective.

      Pupils are going to be writing a persuasive letter written from the first person perspective of the red crayon in ‘The Day the Crayons Quit’. Ensure that pupils have a word bank or display with 'I', 'me', 'my', 'we', 'us' and 'our' prompts.

      Teacher tip

      Give pupils the chance to practise using the notes from their plans to say full sentences aloud before writing them down.

      Equipment

      You need a copy of the 2016 Harper Collins edition of ‘The Day the Crayons Quit', written by Drew Daywalt and illustrated by Oliver Jeffers for this lesson.

      Licence

      This content is © Oak National Academy Limited (2025), licensed on Open Government Licence version 3.0
      except where otherwise stated. See Oak's terms & conditions
      (Collection 2).

      Lesson video

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      Prior knowledge starter quiz

      6 Questions

      Q1.
      Which sentence is punctuated correctly?

      you have so many colours to choose from.
      Correct answer: You have so many colours to choose from.
      you have so many colours to choose from
      you have so many colours to choose from

      Q2.
      Match the word class to its example.

      Correct Answer:noun,pencil case
      Correct Answer:adjective,lonely
      Correct Answer:adverb,regularly
      Correct Answer:verb,understand

      Q3.
      When writing our persuasive letter, we can use our to help us.

      Correct Answer: plan, Plan

      Q4.
      Which sentence should end with a question mark?

      Correct answer: Why are you always choosing me
      How very frustrating
      Stop choosing me
      What a tiring day

      Q5.
      Which sentence is written in the first person?

      It is going to leave today.
      She is going to leave this classroom.
      You are going to move.
      Correct answer: I am going to leave this box.

      Q6.
      Select the verb in this sentence: 'Stop it right now!'

      it
      right
      Correct answer: stop
      now

      6 Questions

      Q1.
      What is the purpose of a command in a persuasive letter?

      to ask the recipient for a favour
      to warn the recipient what could happen
      Correct answer: to instruct the recipient to do something
      to give the recipient general facts

      Q2.
      A complex sentence is formed of a main clause and a clause.

      Correct Answer: subordinate, adverbial, adverbial subordinate, Subordinate

      Q3.
      Which of the following is an example of a sign-off?

      Good morning, Duncan
      Correct answer: Your frustrated friend, Red
      How are you?
      Dear owner,

      Q4.
      What is the purpose of a rhetorical question?

      to have a chat with the reader
      Correct answer: to engage directly with the reader
      to make the reader laugh
      Correct answer: to encourage the reader to reflect on a point

      Q5.
      Which sentence is correctly punctuated?

      If, you choose me again I will have to leave.
      If you choose me again I will have to leave.
      If you, choose me again, I will have to leave.
      Correct answer: If you choose me again, I will have to leave.

      Q6.
      Which of the following is an example of a warning?

      I am looking for another owner.
      Correct answer: If you don't change, I will find another owner.
      I found another owner.
      This is my new owner.

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