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      Planning and writing the first section of an essay about the Windrush

      Lesson details

      Learning outcome

      I can use my research to plan and write the first section of an essay about the Windrush.

      Key learning points

      1. Writing is most successful when structure, content and vocabulary is planned.
      2. Information in this section should be specific and detailed.
      3. Cohesion, making use of research and a formal tone are appropriate in an essay.
      4. An essay can use a bank of research, evidence, statistics and quotes to inform the reader.

      Keywords

      • Specific information - clear, exact and particular information

      • Explanatory sentence - provides the reader with specific information to develop a point

      • Subject-specific vocabulary - words and phrases associated with a topic

      • Relative complex sentence - a sentence formed of a main clause and a relative subordinate clause

      • Fronted adverbial - a sentence starter followed by a comma

      Common misconception

      Pupils may incorrectly include information that is not relevant to section one.

      Learning cycle 1 explicitly outlines which aspects of prior research are appropriate for this section.

      Teacher tip

      Ensuring that pupils fully understand the meaning of subject-specific vocabulary is essential to enabling them to write concisely and accurately.

      Licence

      This content is © Oak National Academy Limited (2026), licensed on Open Government Licence version 3.0
      except where otherwise stated. See Oak's terms & conditions
      (Collection 2).

      Lesson video

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      Prior knowledge starter quiz

      6 Questions

      Q1.
      What is a text's purpose?

      Correct answer: the aim of the text
      the people reading a text
      the layout of a text

      Q2.
      Select the definition of an essay from the list below.

      writing that informs the reader about a real-life event
      writing that informs the reader about a person’s life
      a fictional story
      Correct answer: writing that discusses points and arguments surrounding a particular issue

      Q3.
      Match the parts of an essay with their functions:

      Correct Answer:introduction,states argument and introduces topics to be explored

      states argument and introduces topics to be explored

      Correct Answer:sections,paragraphs related to arguments surrounding the subject

      paragraphs related to arguments surrounding the subject

      Correct Answer:conclusion,summarises the information from the text and restates the argument

      summarises the information from the text and restates the argument

      Q4.
      Match the terms to their definitions.

      Correct Answer:general information,necessary information about the general topic

      necessary information about the general topic

      Correct Answer:specific information,detailed, factual information about a particular topic or argument

      detailed, factual information about a particular topic or argument

      Correct Answer:subject-specific vocabulary,factual vocabulary about the subject

      factual vocabulary about the subject

      Q5.
      In the sections of an essay, information should be kept ...

      general
      Correct answer: specific
      brief

      Q6.
      Select the linguistic features of an essay.

      Correct answer: fronted adverbials
      Correct answer: brackets for parenthesis
      simile
      Correct answer: facts
      alliteration

      6 Questions

      Q1.
      Which two meet the purpose of the sections of an essay?

      Correct answer: inform the reader about a topic or argument related to the essay’s subject
      provide the reader with general information
      Correct answer: provide the reader with specific information
      summarise the key information shared in the whole essay

      Q2.
      Information in section one of an essay should be ...

      general
      Correct answer: specific
      descriptive

      Q3.
      Select facts from the list that are appropriate to use in Section One.

      The Teddy Boys were a group of White, working class men.
      Correct answer: After WW2, Commonwealth countries' citizens were able to live & work in Britain.
      The Notting Hill Race Riots occurred in 1958.
      Correct answer: Many who travelled on the Windrush had served in the British Armed Forces.

      Q4.
      Order the parts of a main section paragraph.

      1 - introductory sentence
      2 - explanatory sentences
      3 - linking sentence

      Q5.
      Which of these should plans include?

      Correct answer: bullet points
      full sentences
      Correct answer: subject-specific vocabulary
      paragraphs

      Q6.
      How can success criteria best be used?

      Correct answer: as a prompt to remind the writer of what to include in their writing
      to tell the writer the only skills that should be included in the writing
      Correct answer: each criteria can be ticked off as it is met in the writing

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