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      Planning the first part of the build-up of 'The Highwayman'

      Lesson details

      Learning outcome

      I can plan a cohesive, descriptive build-up of 'The Highwayman'.

      Key learning points

      1. The purpose of the build-up is to introduce key characters and storylines that will grow throughout the plot.
      2. Writers can use figurative language, poetic devices and ambitious adjectives to engage the reader and create atmosphere.
      3. A compound adjective is two words joined using a hyphen to form one adjective.
      4. Understanding characters' thoughts and feelings enables us to write in greater depth and bring characters to life.

      Keywords

      • Purpose - the aim of a text

      • Structure - how a piece of writing is sequenced

      • Compound adjective - two words joined using a hyphen to form one adjective

      • Hyphen - a punctuation mark that can be used to form compound adjectives

      • Show-not-tell - a writing technique for showing a character’s feelings with description of their actions, body language and facial expressions

      Common misconception

      Pupils may rush through the planning process and miss opportunities to describe and extend key moments.

      The planning worksheet breaks down each section into smaller parts, prompting pupils to focus on key details.

      Teacher tip

      Use the Year 3 'Character: big, beautiful and eye words' unit to develop vocabulary further to describe Bess.

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      Prior knowledge starter quiz

      6 Questions

      Q1.
      What is a narrative poem?

      something that introduces the storyline for some main characters
      to study something in detail to understand its meaning
      Correct answer: a poem that tells a story
      part of a poem consisting of two or more lines grouped together

      Q2.
      What does the build-up of 'The Highwayman' do?

      Correct answer: it introduces the storyline for some main characters
      it means to study something in detail to understand its meaning
      it is a poem that tells a story
      it is part of a poem consisting of two or more lines grouped together

      Q3.
      Put the events of 'The Highwayman' so far in the correct order.

      1 - The Highwayman rides across the moor.
      2 - The Highwayman arrives at the inn-yard.
      3 - He knocks on the window's shutters, but no-one answers.
      4 - He whistles a tune to the window.
      5 - Bess appears at the window.
      6 - Hiding in the stable, Tim (the jealous ostler) spies on the pair.

      Q4.
      Match the vocabulary to the correct definitions.

      Correct Answer:stable-wicket,the door of a stable
      Correct Answer:ostler,a person employed to care for the horses of those staying at an inn
      Correct Answer:plait,a hair style
      Correct Answer:love-knot,a ribbon

      Q5.
      What is the correct definition of 'simile'?

      it compares two things by saying that one thing is another
      Correct answer: it compares two things using ‘like’ or ‘as’
      it is when word endings sound the same
      it is a word that sounds like the sound it is describing

      Q6.
      Which of these is an example of a simile?

      the road was a ribbon of moonlight
      clashing and clattering into the old inn-yard
      Correct answer: his hair was like mouldy hay
      riding - riding - riding

      6 Questions

      Q1.
      Match the keywords to their definitions.

      Correct Answer:purpose,the aim of a text
      Correct Answer:structure,how the writing is sequenced
      Correct Answer:compound adjective,two words joined using a hyphen to form one adjective
      Correct Answer:hyphen,a punctuation mark that can be used to form compound adjectives
      Correct Answer:show-not-tell,when writers show characters’ feelings by describing their actions

      Q2.
      What is the purpose of a setting and character description?

      Correct answer: to describe the setting
      Correct answer: to hook the reader in
      Correct answer: to describe one or more main characters
      to describe how a problem has been resolved
      to describe the plot

      Q3.
      What is the purpose of a build-up?

      to describe the setting
      Correct answer: to engage the reader
      Correct answer: to introduce storylines for main characters
      to describe how a problem has been resolved
      Correct answer: to give clues about what may happen next in the story

      Q4.
      Which of these examples use a hyphen for a compound adjective correctly?

      long-black hair
      Correct answer: red-lipped woman
      Correct answer: ink-black sky
      vast-lonely moor
      jealous-ostler

      Q5.
      Match each show-not-tell example to the emotion it is describing.

      Correct Answer:happy,she beamed with delight
      Correct Answer:disappointed,his heart sank
      Correct Answer:stressed,his heart pounded
      Correct Answer:angry,he balled his fists

      Q6.
      Which adjectives are not appropriate for describing the inn-yard?

      moonlit
      Correct answer: sunny
      desolate
      Correct answer: bustling

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