Crafting physical description for malevolent characters
Lesson details
Learning outcome
I can effectively craft a physical description of a malevolent character.
Key learning points
- Physical descriptions of characters shouldn't just be a list of what they look like or the clothes they are wearing.
- Physical descriptions of characters should use carefully chosen vocabulary to allow the reader to infer information.
- Linking physical description to a character's personality can make descriptions more effective.
- ‘Show not tell’ works on implied meanings.
Keywords
Inference - a conclusion reached on the basis of evidence and reasoning.
Show not tell - a method used by writers which focuses on allowing your reader to infer information instead of simply telling them directly.
Unyielding - doesn't give in to pressure.
Dishevelled - untidy; disordered.
Implied - suggested but not directly expressed.
Common misconception
Pupils will sometimes overload the physical description of their character and list each individual detail, often using cliches.
Describing every part of a character’s appearance in detail can overwhelm the reader. It's better to provide purposeful descriptions that integrate physical appearance with personality to create an engaging and convincing character.
Teacher tip
Guide pupils to select physical traits that not only describe the character's appearance but also hint at their personality or motivations.
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Prior knowledge starter quiz
6 Questions
Q1.An adjective is ...
Q2.What is a verb?
Q3.What is dialogue?
Q4.What are the typical characteristics of a malevolent character?
Q5. A way in which something is usually done or a key feature is known as a ...
Q6.If you read a physical description of a character this means ...
Assessment exit quiz
6 Questions
Q1.Match the keyword to its definition:
a conclusion reached on the basis of evidence and reasoning
a method which focuses on allowing your reader to infer information
suggested but not directly expressed
Q2. Which of the following is an example of 'show not tell'?
Q3.What should you avoid when describing a character's appearance?
Q4. How can a character's physical description reflect their emotions?
Q5.Which description best shows a character's frustration?
Q6.Why is 'show not tell' effective in character descriptions?
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